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Hmm... I was going to say this in my review of your other fic, but I forgot. Regardless of what other people have been saying, the pacing of your story is PERFECT. I love how you manage to bring in emotions and reasons for those emotions into the story, without having it seem like it's tacked on. I love the dynamic between Kakashi and Iruka, and how you can tell that they care for each other by the time they spend "lingering" on exploration.

Keep up the good work, and I look forward to more excellent fanfic from the both of you! ^__^

0_0 SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO very very very hot!

Excellent work ^^

This story was even sweeter than the last. I love reading about Kakashi giving in to his emotions and feelings. Iruka was delightfully wicked and it was so touching when he said he loved Kakashi. You guys write this pair so well that it would be a real treat to read more. The end where Kakashi admitted to loving Iruka about made me melt. I agree these two fics deserve many more reviews. It just goes to show that if you write about a more favored pair the reviews will pour in... even if the story is crap. While the two gems you have written go mostly un-noticed. I applaud you for posting!
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Amy

OMG....that has to be one of the hottest stories i have ever read...and man i have been reading yaoi and het lemons for 6+years. the expressions, the atmosphere, the roleplay everything was soooooooooooooo freaking hot*pants*. wow..... i am a forever changed reader. not very many fics if really any at all can live up to this smut. wow...wow...

Damn... that was erotic! XD And romantic without being cheesy! (And now I'm supposed to go to sleep? XD) LoL, I gotta check out ur other stuff some day! x3 (If u don't mind, please write about Iruka's birthday!!! *-*)

Perfect. Just... perfect *contented sigh* Aaah now I know today is gonna be a great day ^____^

dude, that was awesome! All cute and hot and stuff. ^_^ I would love to see Iruka in the schoolboy outfit, he'd be a doll. for a minute, Kakashi was reminding me of Mr. Kimira from Azumanga Daioh...dirty pervy teacher

you did a great job keeping them in character. This is easily one of the best fics I've read here that keeps the characters true. ^_^ Cake for you! *gives cake*

Wow that was one heck of a long lemon. I hope Iruka's birthday comes quickly.

WOW. The lust, the kink, the LOVE.... this is one helluva KakaIru one-shot! Great job. I can only hope you'll give us Iruka's birthday in the future!

Wow, that was heavy, a little lengthy, but very weel done. I liked what you did with both Iruka and Kakashi's character, Great job. I hope to see more oneday.