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Whoops! I almost forgot to review again! I did read it though.

One thing I've got to say: BOUT DAMN TIME!!! What in the world are you doing that keeps you so busy you can't update this story? And I was a little disappointed with this one. It took that long to update, and yet nothing happened! You left us hanging with mere threads! That's cruel, just cruel.

Ok, now that that's out of my system, on to the real review. As I mentioned above, this was obviously a filler chapter. At the beginning it's decided that they should talk, and 30 (or so) minutes later when you reach the end of the chapter, they still haven't talked...even though they went out for pizza! ........... I agree with Crys (I think it was Crys who said this) in that the piggy-back ride was a good ice breaker but I thought it a bit, just a bit mind you, out of place. Gaara was so angry, he was ready to do violence, but he seemed rather easy to calm down. It was like a switch had been flipped. Of course, that is Naruto's charm and you did convey both Garra's and Sasuke's susceptability to it very well in earlier chapters. I was still cracking up over the piggy-back ride. It's so easy to picture Gaara's face as he has to turn around and go back down the stairs to get drinks. The piggy-back ride was also a good excuse for their bodies to come in contact. I hope we get to see some action next time....even if you want to draw it out and not allow the two boys to go all the way...yet. A very hot make-out session. Mmmmmmm.....that'll do nicely.

I hope work and partying will allow you enough time to update this sooner. You know I pine for it. Keep up the excellent work!

Yummm... now I feel like pizza ;P. But that was quite evil, building up like that and making it a cliffie. Good job with this chapter. I dunno why, I'm just attracted to you fic in some weird way. Maybe it's the unique title and the story's potential. I look forward to more! And I totally get you with the 300 hits/one review thing. Happens to me a lot T_T...

OH EM GEEE YOU UPDATED!! ahh... my god... I don't know what to say.... But that update was to freakin sad and FUCKING ADORABLE!!! when Sasuke and Naruto kissed that was effin hot... but Gaara and Naruto.. omfg.. how cfucking cute... you've killed me....I lvoe when Naruto was telling Gaara to walk etc.. so fucking cute.... your amazing!!! T___________T (Gaara is my favoret character in the anime) rawr... omfg... I freakin lvoe you !!! this fic is amazing! I read it all the time.. I cant wait till the next update!! *squeal*

BITCH. HOW COULD YOU? EVIL, that's what you are! I just can't believe you would do something like that; I thought you might care, just a little, for your readers SANITY. It I had been reading over your shoulder while you were writing I would have SMACKED you over the head for that ending!! Anyway, I love it, and if you don't update soon... I'll probably go insane... So don't take too long! I love it, even if you are an evil tease, so PLEASE update soon.

HOUSEKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i know that i already read this when i was laying with you, but woooooooooot i had to read it again cause i *heart* this fic cause it is prettttttttty and hotttttttttttt and gaaralicious. mmmmm gaaaaaaarrrrrraaaaaa =P~ you know... hehehehe anyways... cant wait for you to write more, but seeing as how it takes a while, i guess i will have to wait cause i got other things in mind for you anyways. goooooooooood chapter girl wtg general, i am soooooooooooo taken with this story cause its got.... alllllllll the ummmmmmmmm goodchit ne? booobs and bear and inne and dane and mada mada and praise tezuka fuji and ryoma...the green haired hottie.. yep... mmmhmmm eiji the redhaired moses, yukimura the pure hearted, me and you and crys cause we are awesome for making our own language... everyone hail the flamel tatts... beware beware beware!
Akutsu for student council, kirihara for president.
mata dane-
your subordinate-Major Baabaa Renaru.

wooooooooooot!! FINA-FUCKIN-LY!!!! you finished the chapter!! and i love it!! lol dude.. the WHOLE piggyback ride thing was GREAT, and of course worked really well as a tension breaker (smart move naruto *smirk*) but dude... it was so cute too!! lmao i can just SEE naruto jumping onto gaara's back, and then making him take him to the kitchen to get drinks haha.. and then, DUDE, when gaara went all still, and naruto whispered orders into his ear to get him to move? *fans self* i told you already but, HOTNESS dude!!!11 mmmm yeah (yep, those're fangirl 1's right there ^__~)

and gaara's internal thoughts of the whispered orders??? dude, KAWAIINESS lol... ahhhh but you are SO EVIL!! you are a DEVIL WOMAN !!! whyyyyy oh WHYYYYYYYY must you end on such a teaser?????? *sobs* gahhhhh but it was so hot.. you're so good.. you suck! lol cuz i want moorrrreeee and you stopped THEEEERRREE :p

anyway, love ya, great job, hurry with your other projects so you can get back to this!!! Colonol Crys and her trusty sidekick Snappy the Whip demand it to be so!! *huggles with sweet sweet promises of future whippings* *cocks brow*

~ lg

damn, i really MUST still be tired!! forgot to say: woooot sex for me!! sweeeeetness ^____^

praise tezzie, ryoma, fuji, eiji the redhaired moses, st. yukimura the purehearted, taichi for supersweetcrushyukeboy, akutsu for taichi's object of love, and all that jazz!! mada mada dane...

love you! inne dane! sou dane!

mata dane,

~ Colonel Crys

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOO!!!! i can't believe the other chappi isn't up yet!!! GReat story!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for ur next update

n_n update please!!!!!!!!!!! must.....find....out...what..happens!!!

omfg you HAVE to update!! this is KILLING ME!!! your fan fic is so godly.. and .. ahh!! your an amzaing writer!
I hope you update soon I'm dying to read the new chapters!!

you rock!