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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, i *finally* read the sneak peek (lol, i almost forgot you'd put it up! for shame!) and daaaaaamn dude gaara got tore up :p so naruto was home, eh? awesome! ..what was he *doing* there i wonder... gahhh i hope you have time to write the rest of this ch and post it sooooon *cries* anyway, good so far, so get crackin! *brandishes whip* >:)
love ya girl, praise tezzie!
~crys
love ya girl, praise tezzie!
~crys
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Darn it! I wanna' know what happens in the rest of chapter 4~!! I hope you manage to finish it soon, and if not, then I will more than willingly wait until it is done! This is a great fic. I've probably already told you this in a past review, but I really like how you portray all the characters. Especially Sasuke. X3 Can't wait for the next chapters! ^.^
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.M.F.G. ..... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I AM LIKE FREAKIN OUT!! I cried and squealed!! gaaah gaara is so fucking hot.. but aahh thif fight is sad rgher
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ygw im crazy plese update soon! *clings* <3
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoops! Sorry I didn't catch those 2 itsy bitsy mistakes. Blame it on being too engrossed in the story....
Anyway, I wish you'd hurry up and finish! I want to know if Gaara gets some lovin' too!!! He deserves it.
And you know, that fight scene, esp. when Naru layed into Gaara was particularly...um...hair-raising? I keep wincing everytime I read it. I don't know, having Naru barrel into me would make me say "Fuck" too. Guess it means you did a good job. I really hate writing fight scenes.
Keep up the good work....and spread the lovin'!!!
Anyway, I wish you'd hurry up and finish! I want to know if Gaara gets some lovin' too!!! He deserves it.
And you know, that fight scene, esp. when Naru layed into Gaara was particularly...um...hair-raising? I keep wincing everytime I read it. I don't know, having Naru barrel into me would make me say "Fuck" too. Guess it means you did a good job. I really hate writing fight scenes.
Keep up the good work....and spread the lovin'!!!
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!!!!!! i love this fic and thought ya had dropped it so i am sooo glad that you are just taking your time, i can live with that, Please though let everyone come to peace gaara doesn't need to be totally hurt here...or naruto for that matter i happen to be a gaara fan so it is ssooo frustrating when he gets the short end of the stick ove rand over..sigh..wait that was neither here nor there...Love the story waiting for the full version of chappie four with anticipation!!!!!!!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh I love this sotry so much please update!!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it Love it. I have a fav new pairing GaaraNaruto thanks to you I hope you udate soon. And I hope he ends up with gaara ive seen enough sasukenaruto to last me a lifetime.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very yummy.Going very well ,can't wait for rest!
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, this fic rocks! I'm not very good at constructive criticism, but there's little to criticize, anyway! Just tiny typos and the like. Don't remember them all. They weren't that important. Anyway, I really like how you portray the characters, especially Gaara. I don't know how incharacter they are (haven't watched Naruto in a while), but the characters you write are still really cool. I can't wait for the next chapters! Keep up the good work! You're amazing! ^.^
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was soooo good. ps i am a garra fan so I sure hope he enters the competition next chapter and no more tears I wonder when they all decide to be a threesome (dreamy grin) aahhh i am soo looking forward to more!! They all have such strong personality that interaction between them is too funny!