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OMG nic.. you rock.. i dont really even know these characters all that well, and i am hooked on it.. i cant freakin wait for the next chapter... hahahaha you are awesome.. i wouldn't change a thing.. motto motto!!!!!

Just thought that I could leave a little note. Bunshin Pizza, so original! As I said before not too long ago. <.< Possibly three seconds ago. Anyway, nice to know that you joined the community of us authors! I hope you update really soon because you've got something going here that's a hit. ^^ Just thought I'd say hi and I'll be around alot more. Updating and such with my own precious/insane creations. Let's see....haha! I really like this one and I see no reason for it to not get only the best reviews! Though I read it while I was hungry! O_O Now I know why you made that warning!Gah! I have a taste for pizza now! With lots of meaty meats! x3 Thanks to Sasuke....Anways! I'll go get pizza now!Thanks to you my nearest Pizza Hut is gonna get rich off of me, but I don't mind...o.o Tis gooood pizza! -Snicker- Going to get pizza now!Chao!

uggg hoseki...how dare u cliffie this story. How dare u. oh well let me know when you make the next chappie :D

Evil! Evil! You're so mean! You better have another chapter out tomorrow! I did find one mistake though. You know I can't resist. You're missing an 'n' in the word 'Turning'. I don't remember where, but it is the first word of a sentence towards the end of a paragraph. How's that for helping? Bwahahaha.....anyway, another great chapter. It would be even better if you'd make the chapters even longer. I love the idea. Is there going to be a threesome???? You can tell me!!! You know my yim id....
Keep up the good work.
Ja!

AHHHHH THIS SI AN AMAZING FIC!!! YOU MADE SASUKE SO.. DELICOUS!! OMFG.. the part were you were describingwhat he was wearing... orgasmatic.. ahh you rock.. does Gaara dress like that too? goth/punk boys are so hot :D aHHHHHH that was amazing.. you better update soon!!! *scqueals* I love this fic so much@

kya~ so good :3.. off to the confessions of the feelings already huh?

Well, the first chappie got me hungry for pizza... I should read warnings more often ^^;;;
Hey, but nice job. Sasuke in his goth-clothes made me drool and you even made a cliffy... which annoys me 'cause now I'll have to beg for a the next chapter... *takes a deep breath* here goes... Please, please, please update soon? *pleading pout*
I'm really curious what Naruto is going to say to Gaara... and what the heck Sasuke wants from Gaara... Until then. ja ne. ^^V

Great start, good to see you getting back into writing, and yeah, I want pizza now. Constructive criticisms would only be to go through and edit as even me, the guy with terrible english and grammar, noticed a few things!

made sense and made me hungry as hell but luckly i have food at hand! look forward to more!

;_; ebil.. i'm hungry now.. haha, great story!!!! please update soon~