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for Bunshin Pizza

by Houseki

person NaruSasu FanBoi
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cliffy indeed! please update soon!!
person Lady of Gryffindor
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How darling! This looks to be a really good story! Keep it up!
person blisblop
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smiles causualy...threesome!?Smiles showing teeth.OK,got characters ...please do not tease the readers too much.
person alley kitten
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glomp* thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it ^_^ can't wait for the next chapter...
person ladygizarme
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wheee, another ch in a matter of hours!! you're tryin' to make me look bad, aren't ya, AREN'T ya!!?? (lol, not that that takes much with my awful up'd schedule lately..*cough*) but yayzies! i'm a credited beta! woot!! (bout time i returned the favor, nya?) anyway, IMed you w/a few more edits... prob not the best idea for us to do the edits between 3-5am....*coughcough* yeah, anyway, you lil tease, i hope you find time to write more soon cuz you KNOW how impatient i am :p (thx for the food-craving-free ch this time around though lol) *huggles*

~lg (you know me ^__~)
person Zoe
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was will put together even though it is the first chapter ^__^. It was a good pizza story with Naruto characters, it is deffiently worth a read. Good Job Nicole!
person Alley Kitten
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it ^_^ please update soon, cause i sooooooooooo want to read the rest of it ^_^ *glomp*
person matthew
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job...i want to see where this is going. make the chaps a little longer and u can get a 5 outa me yet.
person fyredevyl
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally! A story of your own! Yay! This is going to be great! I like the 3 you've chosen and can't wait to read more. You better update soon.
Sorry I can't leave a longer review, I've got a tutor to see.
Ja!
person ladygizarme
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo, guess who! woot, i finally get to review you instead of you reviewing me ^__^ anyway, love the start to it and you KNOW you sure as hell better stick with it or i'm gettin my whip out!! oooh, maybe the RIDING CROP!! or.. how bout the steel tips... hmm.... *goes to look through collection* muwahahahahaaa!! yeah, you better write more!! and dude, wish you'd have warned ME before i read it! *changes drool bucket as stomach growls* nice of you to warn the others :p *glomps* ja ne (in IM lol!!)

~ you-know-who *smirk*