rate_review Reviews

*scowles feircely* ITS ABOUT TIME!!!!!!!!!!! i loved the new chapter, but it was a little confusing to read since you kept switching tenses and your grammar needs a little work. Other than that, I have no complaints. Sasuke has a soft side! yay! And Poor Naruto-kun! I hope that you update SOON!!!!!!!!! please.

Soooo good. o___o <3
More please.

what is takin u so long update already or i hunt u down

update , please , It's a very long time , don't drop this story , It's a great story

Ack! you cant leave it like that!!!!!!!!! Upodate! Update!!!! Please?!?!?!?!?

OMG, HOT!! I want to know what Sasuke does to Naruto-kun! Please update soon! : ?

Luff to your good story!
JessRE.

*smiles from reading such a kick ass story* then *shudders from thinking of what Sasuke is going to do* Aaa! Cliff hanger? How could you? Oh you so have to keep on writing. the grammar, syntax, and spelling IS really rough, but you have a great plot and you get the point across. The last chapter was great and I'm really impressed by you writing a story in a second language. This is going really good, and I really want to read more. Your dialogue is very strong. Specific details about the surroundings and what everyone looks like could be something you want to work on in later stories and writings, but even rough as this writing is, the story is excellent!

omg please oh please continue, this story is so hot and great :P lol i luv this dangerous side to sasuke's character and i luv the position *cough cough* that naruto's in right now :P so please continue soon please *whimpers*

you story was godd get new chapter soon. youvery lazy.

I've enjoyed it so far. Very alluring. However you need to make your chapters longer ... it satisfies the readers more lol either that or update really fast. and sex in the car with his driver there sounds kinky ... hope Naruto gets to work on time tommorow.