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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Don't stop there!
You evil thing you! X3
*will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter* ^_~

i love it!!!! please update soon!!! i hope we getta lemon about sasuke and naruto, i especially like how naruto still has his strong will and strangth to carry out what he wants to do!!!! very good job!!! hope to read more very soon!!!!!!!!

I am all for warm and lucious kisses.Excellciour!

wow, that's a really horrible cliff hanger!!!! wahhhhh!!!!

actually, it's a pretty dam good cliff hanger for the one that wrote this but it's not for those that are reading it!!! you have to update now!

i don't like neji in this one so much. he seems to ooc cause he's talking too much. i also hope this isn't going to have nejinaru or naruneji, it'd get too complicated. plus seeing sasuke's position in this fic is so wicked!

Uhh...I think you should work on your writing style....You use alot of "!" At the end of your sentences when not needed...your paragraphs need t be spaced out as well....and some things in there don't make alot of sense....your should read over your writing, until you get most of these goals done, I won't review or say "Good job" O.o I'm not trying to be mean or anything, I'm just having a hard time reading this style of writing.

Ah how lovely! I absolutely love the plot of this fic. There are a few grammar and tense mistakes littered through here, but nothing big. Keep up the good work!

Oh! I love this. It's really good!