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person Woot
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome man! I bow before you, a humbled soul. What about a Naru/Kin next?
person THE U.N.B.O.R.N.
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL IN EVERY.POSSIBLE.WAY. you must continue this!hope fullt even make a story about akumagakure...anyways,my faves were tsunade and shizune in 2nd and kyuubi and tsunade in first.PLEASE CONTINUE THESE!!!
P.S. please continue "master of the house" on fanfiction.net.

U RULE!

THE U.N.B.O.R.N.
person xXx
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I demand a Kin/Naruto/Tayuya or a Kyuubi/Naruto/Anko
person Schwarz 'The Shadow'Bruder
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SSWWWWEEEEEEETTTTT!!!!! This is the logest chapter ever. Really good, but plaese don't stop it here. you still have naruto/shizune, naruto/kin, naruto/hisame(OAV 2), naruto/kyuubi(just the two of them), naruto/tenten, and many more. Plaese don't stop here. And Happy b-Day
person waffles
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can u please make a naruto/ino pairing or naruto/tenten thx if u do
person Backlash Wave
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks again for all the awsome one-shots you put in here. Once again Happy Birthday. I love all of these fics. I hope that you write more in the future because I look forward to reading. IT'S MY BIRTHDAY TODAY SO I thought I'd read this particular one again since it just got put back up. I love these one-shots because Naruto finally got what was coming to him. LOTS AND LOTS OF WOMEN. Anyway I hope your birthday was a good one.
person Neal
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kind of what I had expected, all smut no plot and enjoyable smut too read. You're opinions on why Haku must be female squick me out a little, he's like 12 so of course he's going to be played by a female if he had lived to have his voice break he may have been voiced by a man afterwards. In other news, I like your choices in females, I'd have swapped Haku for Ino myself. Anyway, good smut, decent writing, I'd comment on the plotlessness of it but I write the Bible and one of the chapters is "Here's a pizza, smoke my pole."
person ryuu
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo
i was wondering if you can do one last one with naruto/temari/tenten
i think the others would like that
person mike
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are a good writer and i think u could turn some of these lemons in to stories and 1 i woulds like to see as a story is the last one with naruto, kyuubi, and tsunade pairing . i would really love if you made it in to a story
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
niceness.

you should do one like the Tayuya story, except with Ino or Sakura