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person Backlash Wave
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write the one with Kyuubi. Then do the other ones please. I seriously love these one shots. More chapters please. :)
person K
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should go with kyuubi/naruto or maybe kurenai/naruto/anko eh? Well with whatever you go with I can't wait for the next one.
person Church
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do a kyuubi/Anko/Naruto PLZ!! i mean dey r rather sadistic sexy n aggressive! or just do a Kyuubi/Naruto if ya dont wanna do it
person NChisholm
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I realy liked the reaction of Temaris Bros in her Chap. as well as the backround about them being overprotective....

ps. Kyubi foor the next chappy.. keep on writing cause people are reading out there.....
person xXx
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that Kyuubi would be a good choice since she probably has a VERY big amount of experience.
person Darrell
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KYUUBI LOL THAT SHOULD BE FUNNY AS ALL HELL CANT WAIT
person Darrell
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I TAKE THAT BACK DO A KYUUBI/NARUTO/ANKO PAIRING NOW THAT WOULD BE EXTREMELY HOT WITH NARUTO BEING TIED UP AND EVERYTHING
person teamkyubi13
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. these stories kep getting beter. though this one was alitle odd but it was good just the same. i did enjoy greatly the threeway betwwen naruto,shizune, and tsunade. i cant wait for the next one, keep it up the great works

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person raider of the last fanfic
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good pairs so far. you should write one with a naruto/female haku pairing. id like to see that
person Hellvas
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your stories except for one thing: Kyuubi is coming out much too easily. Kyuubi personality come out for any more than a few minutes and even then after the first time on the bridge, Naruto has always had nominal control. If he wants to stop, he will. And sense Naruto doesn't like causing unnessicary harm, he wouldn't have gone along with a qaurter of the things you've had Kyuubi do. Naruto would be able to take control back easily. Kyuubi cannot get out save its chakra. It could never take Naruto over lioke you keep having it do. Remember, Naruto controls Kyuubi(albeit minorly)not the other way around. If you believe I'm wrong, emial me.Thank you for your time.