AFF Fiction Portal
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A nice chapters well done we say... Hope you'll do more. Naruto/Ayame fic do sound nice... Or can you do a Naruto/Tsunami fic? Anyway, hope you update soon. We really like you're stories.
person Echoside
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey do you think you could make a Naruto/Harem?
person K
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed this thus far. Maybe you should do a Naruto/Kin or maybe Naruto/Ayame (the girl at the ramen shop, I've run into people that don't know this so don't think I think you're stupid or something cause I don't think that). Anyway those are just some suggesctions. The final decision is up to you, the author. Either way I hope to be able to read your next update soon.
person Anonymous
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, sorry I haven't been able to give a review for each one. Can't wait for the another chapter, any hints as to the next pairing?
person Church
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THE CHAPPY!!!! good writing and the sex is good but still needs some work. The "scare Kakashi" mission made me laugh so hard and the part where Naruto gets S class missions to please some girls! and when Naruto gets some payback oh that gave a good feeling if only there was a story about it.
person Anoka
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are yuo gonna update or not?
person Backlash Wave
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome as always. Update soon please. By Friday if possible PLEASE.
person Tatsudoshi
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love all your Naruto pairings! I think my favorite is the Naru/Hana one. Keep up the good work. Oh, and if I may make a suggestion, here is a challenge...make a Naru/Tenten fic. Out of all the Naruto fics I've cum (lol) across I've only found one. Just a suggestion.
person Saike
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When the hell are you gonna update you bastard!?!
person Sekide
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story ^_^. Why don't you do one on the Anbu girl, I think her name is Uzuki Yugao.