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some ideas:
NaruKinTemari
NaruTenTemari
NaruTayuTemari
NaruAnkoShizune
or do some of the filler girls

Love the the story can you make more pairings of Hana your probably the only one that wrote one

Well I would LIke to see more

Naruto/Hana

Naruto/Anko of course

Naruto/Kurenai

more Naruto/Tsunade

Oh and please more Naruto/Temari!!

Hope to read more of your work, also all the women mentioned above would be good for threesomes. Can't wait for your next installment

great please here are some pairings
Nar x Hana x Tusme, Nar x Kin, Nar x Hana X Anko, Nar x Kurenia x Hinata, Nar x Hinata x Hanabi, Nar x harem= all girls with bloodlimit or a family jutsu that includes Itchi and haku

Keep up the good work and please do these pairings

Hey love the fics I,ve got some pairings for you
Nar x Hana x Tsumi Hana's mother ^_^
Nar x Hana x Anko
Nar x Kurenia x Hinata student and teacher go together
Nar x Tenten x Kurenia
Nar x Kin x Rin
Nar x Kyuubi X Rin x Shizune
Nar x Hinata x Hinabi sisters
Nar x Hinata x Hinabi X Haku x Any girl with bloodlimit AND PLEASE NO RAPE WITH THESE I HATE RAPE

just sayin that i hope you have ur next story by march 30 cause that my b-day just ayin it and also good job u hentai yeah i'm one for readin this stuff but we all have a inner pervert

I like all the stories hope read more of your work.

I'd like to read more of Anko with Naruto if possible

keep up the great work

how about naruto gets raped by anko someone else

i love all your work dont ever stop and i want to see a naruto/tsunade pairing wear she orders him to strip naked and have sex with her and so on, im sure u can come up with a good story with that

I liked your last update on Naruto's birthday and his present was Kyuubi. But why was Kakashi going towards Naruto's apartment and hope you put a threesome up with TenTen,Temari, with Naruto. I have to say I want to see another Anko and Naruto too. I like the way you started the first one but I hope you make this one a bit easier to follow JTB8834@aol.com Your making your own Akatsuki tell me more about it in an e-mail when you get time to do so.

Every time you update I do try to read a new pairing to see whether or not I might have just gotten one that wasn't as well-written the time before when I tried to read, but today I've concluded I don't think that is true. There are a lot of errors in the stories, and honestly with the run-on sentences running rampant in your one-shots, and the sheer amount of redundancy in your writing I beg you to get a good beta. It might be that I'm not a huge fan of the themes you choose either though. I'm not trying to be mean, but when all of the reviewers are going on and on about how wonderful this collection is and there are still errors, it is difficult not to say something. I know the feeling, sometimes I'll read my stuff and think, "OMG, what were you people thinking when you said you liked this?" I'm not saying people shouldn't like your work, only that I do believe that it needs a bit more polish ^___^