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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more.:)
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i notice that you are doing a lot of anal for naruto when he goes to finish off why not have a few stories after you finsh naruto being with each girl and have him finish off inside there cunt, and the after math of him doing so, plus in different situations than the first scene thar had naruto and the girl/woman.
would you do a follow up or spin-off for each scene to see how everyone reacts to naruto and the girl/woman being with him?
then have one big orge/harem style story with one scene them being pregnant and the other like how you have written the others.
you could always expand on the scene and have a spin-off story from it and what happend after etc etc.
if you count all the females he could be with the total would be 18 girls/women. you done five just 13 more to go.
theres still Shizu or whatever Tsunade assistant is and Tsunami, sakura, hinata, ino, tenten, kin the sound girl, Hana kibas older sister, temari that anbu female in the leaf counter attack. then there is haku if you consider haku female a scene with her would be great.
hmm just thought of susakes mother though i dont know her name do you? you could have a scene with her kyuubi reserrecting her like in "kyuubi no kitsune" and doing the nasty and considering the fact naruto will do hinata thats one eye bloodline done that only leaves the sharingan plus it would rub it in susakes face with naruto doing it to his mother, or maybe him becoming susakes step-father. damn forgot hanabi that would probably be harder to do concidering the age she is and when naruto age in these scene hes what 12-15? unless you do it when he 12 making hanabi 9? unless you fiddle her age or do it when shes in her teens.
the follow up to ranma getting the girls pregnant would be something to see.
so please do haku next please i would like that plus you have hinted with that happening in your stories.
Haku haku haku
would you do a follow up or spin-off for each scene to see how everyone reacts to naruto and the girl/woman being with him?
then have one big orge/harem style story with one scene them being pregnant and the other like how you have written the others.
you could always expand on the scene and have a spin-off story from it and what happend after etc etc.
if you count all the females he could be with the total would be 18 girls/women. you done five just 13 more to go.
theres still Shizu or whatever Tsunade assistant is and Tsunami, sakura, hinata, ino, tenten, kin the sound girl, Hana kibas older sister, temari that anbu female in the leaf counter attack. then there is haku if you consider haku female a scene with her would be great.
hmm just thought of susakes mother though i dont know her name do you? you could have a scene with her kyuubi reserrecting her like in "kyuubi no kitsune" and doing the nasty and considering the fact naruto will do hinata thats one eye bloodline done that only leaves the sharingan plus it would rub it in susakes face with naruto doing it to his mother, or maybe him becoming susakes step-father. damn forgot hanabi that would probably be harder to do concidering the age she is and when naruto age in these scene hes what 12-15? unless you do it when he 12 making hanabi 9? unless you fiddle her age or do it when shes in her teens.
the follow up to ranma getting the girls pregnant would be something to see.
so please do haku next please i would like that plus you have hinted with that happening in your stories.
Haku haku haku
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the rape thing. its worng. aneway i thought this was a good cahpter nuntheless because i have been waiting forver for a naruto/tayuya sex senes and this was pritty good like your other works. keep writing. sorry about spelling worst subject.
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I you don't like rape then don't right it. No one force you to write a rape scene and I doubt anyone care if you didn’t.
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good. Next do a Kin/Naruto then a Shizune/Naruto then Temari/Naruto. Then do threesomes like Kurenai/Naruto/Anko or Tsunade/Naruto/Shizune or Kin/Naruto/Tayuya. Also, do you take requests? Could you do a Hanabi/Naruto if it's not to much trouble.
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And do a Tenten/Naruto. She's an underrated character.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was going through the list of Naruto fics and I notice this one about weird pairings so I decided to check it out but I lost it before I cold read em. As it turns out you're the author. Well ain't that a nice co-inc-cey-dinc. Enjoyed em and I hope that you get some more out soon DGOC (Like a certain Harry Potter fic whose name shall not be named). See you on the flip
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
naruto/ino please ^_^
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo Demon God of Chaos,
Holly Shit... Never thought of you doing this. You did a pretty good job of making such stories, well done!. I havn't read all of the Naruto pairings yet but I expect nothing less in all the others. :) See you soohn at school, sinds whe're in the same group. *Evil Laugh*
Yours Faithfully,
Me the Witch!
Holly Shit... Never thought of you doing this. You did a pretty good job of making such stories, well done!. I havn't read all of the Naruto pairings yet but I expect nothing less in all the others. :) See you soohn at school, sinds whe're in the same group. *Evil Laugh*
Yours Faithfully,
Me the Witch!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well As I said on the mailing list.. Here is my review.
::blinks:: okay not what i was expecting.. Still VERY GOOD...
though i have to ask.. Wouldnt the genjutsu that Tsunade uses,
break down under such close contact? or at least with the obvious
disruption of chakra that climax must represent?
other than that i cant think of anything...
Good Job.. and keep writing them!
-Ame
::blinks:: okay not what i was expecting.. Still VERY GOOD...
though i have to ask.. Wouldnt the genjutsu that Tsunade uses,
break down under such close contact? or at least with the obvious
disruption of chakra that climax must represent?
other than that i cant think of anything...
Good Job.. and keep writing them!
-Ame