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person Reo 15x
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice Chapter But I don't Think Naruto Guys can orgasm 5 times in a day, If you can it would hurt a lot. I would like to see a Naruto/Tenten Pairing I haven't seen a lemon with them in a long time. Either that or a Naruto/Temari pairing. Keep it on.
person carcharoth13
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hah, more het! Good stuff, and it's NOT YAOI! That's an achievement in itself! And you must have been the first person to ever do Naruto/Yukie! ... Looking at the reviews above, maybe it wasn't a good idea to say that... But still, that's an original pairing! And it was cool, too. Definitely my favourite so far, though I also liked the Kurenai one. As for suggestions, I'm still hoping that someone's going to do a Naruto/Yuugao lemon, and I'm fairly certain that's never been done before... but maybe I shouldn't have said that. If you're wondering (and so many do... shame), Yuugao's that hot purple-haired ANBU chick. Maybe she could arrest Naruto or something... who knows. Heh heh. Anyway, these are really good so far, or at least that's what I think, so keep it up and you'll have a good fic, or collection of fics, or lemons, or whatever you want to call it. Good luck!
person ryuu
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice Naruto/Tsunade lemon.
Keep up the good work.
person roninke
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How about a Kyuubi empowered Naruto doing a Naruto/Harem? I've always thought that the chakra tails could be used like tentacles, if you catch my drift?
person Drolkrad
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter man i really am a fan of you're stories i really like Kyuubi no Kitsune its one of my favorite's, also this is sorta a request "do you take those?" i was wondering if you were willing to write a Naruto/Tsunade pairing i never see any fic's with them together and would really love to read one, so anyways please keep up the awsome job i love your workand look forward to your next pairing, peace;)
person me
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol it started out a bit sketchy but got rly good into it. i rly enjoyed it. it was awsome!
person ryuu
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NARUTO/TSUNADE NEXT PLEASE!!! =d
person maoloch
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story
person Shaun Ward
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool story. i would like to see you do a story with Tayuya in it.
person diss appointed
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this lateest chapter was simply horrible. the dioluge was weak. the charaters were so out of characters were out of charcter. and your explaination and general writing took to much from the flow of the story. this was so sad and i like the first chapter alot.