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Hey great chapter but he shouldn't of said a few of the things but maybe the peeping but him touching him like that or doing something that would be hurtful was wrong... But Jirayia had it coming but not getting his shit smashed and almost killed.. I wouldn't mind trying to Beta but I may not be a great person of help... But if you need one e-mail me at JTB8834@aol.com and tell me more about you Akatsuki idea Josh

Can you do one whit Naruto and Deidara that involves the mouths on her hands on Naru-chans cock and the other one on his balls? And the usual after that. :D

Naruto sakuras mom? now that sounds HOT but if you do it make Sakura walk on them after they finish and join in for the second round in a threesome *links his lips will stuffing Kleenex in his nose* HOT HOT HOT :D

And make one where Sakura and Ino are hurt and the only way to save them is to bond them as Naruto's (sex) slaves. OR Naruto rapes and enslaves Ino to him and together they corrupt sweet little virgin Sakura-chan. OR a threesome whit them involving Oiroke-no-Jutsu-Shemale-Naruto (aka Futanari Naruto).

I would Love to see both of them one after another giving Naruto a blowjob and looking up at him while doing it and throwing once in a while the words "Naruto-sama" and/or "Goshujin-sama"

Don't get me wrong I love Sakura and Ino but I also love to see them in one of the positions mentioned above.

P.S.: Even a Naruto x Ino's Mom x Ino in the same stuff as above. The reason her husband/father was killed during a mission and Naruto has been friends whit Sakura and Ino and their parents and so he comforts her/them in the only way he can: psychically. AU Fic or something.

I love your story to the extreme!!!! You are a great writer and I love this stuff. keep up the great work. And I have some suggestions for pairings. you don't have to use them or any thing either. but here they are

naruto sakura
naruto ino
naruto sakuras mom
naruto another kakashi ( I liked becuase never seen that before, very clever!!!!!!)
Naruto Temari


well that is it. that is all I can think about!!!! Great again!!!!
If you reply pls don't say any thing about the lemons just pairing and stuff cause my dad could see them and I really don't want to explain this to him!!!! Thanks!!!

should have one with Naruto and all of the Naruto girls all in one
am i right guys

You're stories are fucking awesome. (heh heh... i said "fucking" about smut. Heh heh) Anywho there better written than most regular stories i've read. That's kinda sad considering pornos are considered to be the worst written and most plotless stories in existance. Also it would be cool if you did another ayame story or maybe shizune and ayame. Hmm... Not quite sure were that came from or how that'd be done, but it'd be fuckin' awesome. Plus, i'm certain a genius like you could pull it off.

Would it be possible to make a fanfiction of a continuation from the Naruto/Kyuubi/Tsunade one-shot but making it in chapters and not a long one-shot

i wish to be in ur Akatsuki group....after all, u are a genius of hard work........

Can you make one with Naruto x Hinata x Hanabi to try some thing new.