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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kickass chapter i have to admit even though she is like 50 she has to be one of the sexiest female anime characters ever (except maybe anko) OH my birthday is the 6th of december us perverts have got to stick together lol anyway goodwork and update soon
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your version of Akatsuki? Sign me up, just contact me over on Hawk's fanfiction forum so that I can get your e-mail address.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome stories!!!^_^
you should have narusakuhina, narusakuino, naruto/tenten/temari,etc...
you should have narusakuhina, narusakuino, naruto/tenten/temari,etc...
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
also more with like narusakukyu,naruinokyu and others ofcourse...etc...
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what if u dont have MSN messanger?
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was quite the chapter good Naruto / Tsunade action...the sex scenes are very well written and quite explicit too...great combo as well, mature content and humor in the end of the chapter... you are now in my private author worship corner ( actually your the 1st one to get this honor ^_^U )...
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if you could do a naruto/tenten/temari pairing. You could probably just have them argue to Naruto over who is better or something, because I always imagined them having a sort of rivalry after the chuunin preliminaries. By the way, your writing seems to be getting a little sloppy, or rushed. Sentences drag on forever, and you don't really give any verbal description of pleasure besides moans. (example, try saying screaming a bit or whimpering for girls instead of saying moaning over and over) besides that, great story ^^ I hope you make it to 1000 reviews, and that you get the next chapter out soon. Ja ne. And good luck.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm....sex while the babe is unconcious...sweet! that kidna freaked me out a bit with the fake rambling naruto was doing lol. tsunade then offered to teach him on how to do a woman right now thats class.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your fics rock man and your birthday is 9 days before mine so right on man well keep up the good work
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story line, but you never seem to get the main characters in there, like maybe you should do a Naru/Hina, or maybe a Naru/Ino, a Naru/Sakura would be nice. Just more main characters would be nice.