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person Thanos Farek Seid
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jeje, great chapter, as alwas, oh well, if you have a spot, i want join to your akatsuki. see you.
person z
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
suzumebachi from the kamizuru clan or the koto princess from the fuuma clan i shes unnamed but you can find her picture and suzumebachi pictures on leafninja.com in the biographies the section
person Thanos Farek Seid
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jeje, great chapter, as alwas, oh well, if you have a spot, i want join to your akatsuki. see you.
person paul
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i wanna join
person dot dot dot
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story a lot. I find more pariings of Naruto, than just Sakura and Hinata. All in one story! So that kinda makes you my hero.

What I think you should do next? Temari/Naruto/Tayuya ,have it take place during Shikamaru's fight with Tayuya. But with this certain twist, Naruto steps in, instead of getting Sasuke because of Shikamaru being in danger. Tayuya and Naruto battle, but his chakra suddenly stops working (wierd i know). This is where Tayuya decides to take advantage of an defenseless Naruto. Only to have her plans temporarily halted by Temari. They decide to share, cause sharing is caring, in a weird sexual way.

I would be delighted if you oculd do that, cause you never did one of these before. I was wondering if you could kinda use my idea as a base. Since I am too nervous to write fics, and then you can add your magic. I would greatly appreciate it.

May your youthful flames continue to burn through your writing, YOSH! (That was uneeded)
person DeadDemonSealingDeathSeal
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wish to Join your Akutsaki.
person Ryu-kun
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A threesome would be nice, but only if it's one with two of the Rookie 9 girls plus Tenten and Temari, but excluding Sakura (I can't stand her). I think I've had it with older women, and Naru-kun would certainly agree with me. Naru:"HELL YEAH!!!"
person lord 1337
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really hope that you do another character besides tsunade, she has been in quite a few pieces already. instaed i hope that you chose a girl (or two) (or three for that matter) that hasnt been featured in a while such as tamari tayuya or anko. on another note THANK YOU FOR QUITING THE WHOLE MALE CHARACTER A FEMALE THING it seemed that you had a hard time writing it and it showed (plus no matter what its hard to get a proment male character to turn female in my mind). in any case i love this collection and hope that you continue it for a long while to come. your one of the few people that can write a good lemon. ^_^
person lazy
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kurenai is maybe pregnant just think about it that they will do with storys when a good guy dies his girlfriend is pregnant
person Takimaru
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You could always use girls from the filler arcs, cause there are quite few of them.