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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great new lemon. Can't wait to see what the next update's gonna bring. The new akatsuki seems like a great idea. No doubt, it's probably gonna make whatever pairing you put it into, a really interesting one. Hope you update soon.
Farezzz
Farezzz
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i would like to join
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was good but more demon kyuubi posesed naruto would be good.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet no more tsunade do some more of the sound girls
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A. Yes I would like to join the Akatsuki.
B. I thank you for sticking once again to ORIGINALLY FEMAL characters.
C. Thanky you! Thank you! Thank you!
D. Please keep it that way!
E. ...hmmm no "Female Itachi" etc.
F. There is no F. (F spins around and loops itself into S)
B. I thank you for sticking once again to ORIGINALLY FEMAL characters.
C. Thanky you! Thank you! Thank you!
D. Please keep it that way!
E. ...hmmm no "Female Itachi" etc.
F. There is no F. (F spins around and loops itself into S)
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do a Naruto/Tsume(Kiba's mom) for the next chapter. Or do a Naruto/Hana.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That being said, just a little reminder:
People flames are not the way. If you don't like the story say so, even declare that you won't
ever read it again, but no attacking people, please it's just rude. Takreial or whatever
your name is, you have no right to be telling people that they should stop writing, or for
that matter, that they should ask you for permission to continue writing, while we're on the
subject of you, I would like to point out that what I just said is suppsosed to be a global
rule, you are really an exception, anyone who wants to rag on this moron is welcome and
encouraged to do so, maybe he/she will shut up and stop complaining. When you review you should
comment on the writing, give hints as to what you would like to see, but not insult the author or
other reviewers, unless of course, said reviewer is just plain rude, than please, get them to shut
up. Also no smartass remarks, like "that's what the SEARCH BUTTON is for." please, we don't need
your idiocy clogging our air. People unwilling to follow simple rules of edicit should politly
refrain from writing reviews, that is not to say that the author should then abuse his reviewers
but don't be a jerk. Also, people who are busy requesting yaoi, take a gander at the section the
story is under "Het" this means that yaoi is a big no-no, plus as someone said, we have enough yaoi
and this author is actually pretty good so we should not have him ruin his talent on yaoi. With that
out of the way, it should be noted that I hate these males become females bit, it seems kind of wierd
to me. I can understand that if someone only read the first chapter and then the last, like, five
chapters they might have a poor opinion of the writing but there is no need for that, read the whole
thing before flaming. If these rules are complicated, feel free to e-m@il me and I will try to be as
quick and blunt as possible without hurting your feelings.
Thank you,
DGoC, please keep it up.
All you reviewers, be nice or shut the &^T& up and buzz off.
People flames are not the way. If you don't like the story say so, even declare that you won't
ever read it again, but no attacking people, please it's just rude. Takreial or whatever
your name is, you have no right to be telling people that they should stop writing, or for
that matter, that they should ask you for permission to continue writing, while we're on the
subject of you, I would like to point out that what I just said is suppsosed to be a global
rule, you are really an exception, anyone who wants to rag on this moron is welcome and
encouraged to do so, maybe he/she will shut up and stop complaining. When you review you should
comment on the writing, give hints as to what you would like to see, but not insult the author or
other reviewers, unless of course, said reviewer is just plain rude, than please, get them to shut
up. Also no smartass remarks, like "that's what the SEARCH BUTTON is for." please, we don't need
your idiocy clogging our air. People unwilling to follow simple rules of edicit should politly
refrain from writing reviews, that is not to say that the author should then abuse his reviewers
but don't be a jerk. Also, people who are busy requesting yaoi, take a gander at the section the
story is under "Het" this means that yaoi is a big no-no, plus as someone said, we have enough yaoi
and this author is actually pretty good so we should not have him ruin his talent on yaoi. With that
out of the way, it should be noted that I hate these males become females bit, it seems kind of wierd
to me. I can understand that if someone only read the first chapter and then the last, like, five
chapters they might have a poor opinion of the writing but there is no need for that, read the whole
thing before flaming. If these rules are complicated, feel free to e-m@il me and I will try to be as
quick and blunt as possible without hurting your feelings.
Thank you,
DGoC, please keep it up.
All you reviewers, be nice or shut the &^T& up and buzz off.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as always i have to say for the next Tsunade.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not your best, but good none the less.
TSUNADE
TSUNADE
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good update! I would go with Tsunade.