AFF Fiction Portal
person Anttolas
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yo master thi one with yoshino i think it was good but a bit confusing but still good the same with diedara and zetsu but still keep up the good work with everything
person Because I Can
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well It didn't suck. Although you have definantly done better.
person Josh
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey DGOC like the updates and I am wondering are you starting to like Hinataenough to do a story with her and Naruto together or are you messing with our heads... E-mail me at JTB8834@aol.comand I have a few questions to ask you once you e-mailed me thanks...
person ki
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
weird chapter i vote for a naruto and tsunade scene next
person Rowin
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always looking forward to upcomeing chapters.
person yuki-chan
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story, i was pretty confussed at first, but it was still great. keep up the great work, i think the next chapter, should be the dirtiest and sexiest KureniaX Naruto chapter in the entire story, i want to see them get it on hard!
person liboy36031
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how about a naru/kure/tsu?
person Z
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think it was avrage not bad avrage and the next one should be tsunade and kyuubi-chakra naruto
person PhantomHokage
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter man strange but good and as for your next update i think you should do a Kurenai and Tsunade i mean i think they can share him but if your only going to do one of them then i chose Kurenai well update soon
person BrianDarksoul
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
32 was rather weird and hentaish hehe.
Gooooooo Krenai Chan suck him dry!!!!!!

*Bellatrix Lestrange sweatdrops*
Brian....Your a bigger twisted bastard than Voldemort.... Hump my brains out Muggle scum!!!!

*Brian Darksouls curren whereabots is unknown, rumoured to be running from an
insane closet sex maniac that is hellbent at gettying him to be the next dark lord*