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person shadow
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love these stories they are the best iv'e ever read and to im just making a suggestion youv'e done a naruto/ female itachi how about a naruto / female sasuke
just idea cant wait for the next chapter
person Farukh
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well this pairing was a pretty good one. i have read all of your pairings so far and they all seem to just fall into place with one another. I loved your Naruto/Kyuubi/Tsunade pairing. that was one of the best one's i had read. I cant wait for the next pairing to be up. Oh and i vote for Shizune and naruto. Maybe after you can hit it with Kurenai and Naruto. Or like you stated, ignore all of this and do something out of the blue.
Hope the next update comes soon.
person hey
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
here's my review, now continue! and while ur at it, try to make the stories good at least, like better desccription in the sex, i dont care about the background story, just good sex, i noticed each chapter is declining in qualitiy as they go on, so far the Nara one was the worst, some were really good! i like this whole fanfic, but try to make the sex more interesting
person Kage no Ryuu
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your stories, and i've read both, this one (every chapter ^_^) and Dinner Date over at FF.net, i hope you update soon and if possible make a chapter with Naru/Kure/Hina pairing, the look great together since Hinata is the perfect girl for Naruto, to calm him down a bit, and 'cause Kurenai is just obsessed with making sure Hinata is safe and all that.....

Keep the good work DGOC

KnRyuu ^^
person Intel
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wierd chapter, but still good.

Anyways, for the next pairing, the Naruto/Kyuubi/Shizune sounds cool...like a follow-up to the Naruto/Kyuubi/Tsunade chapter.

Update soon!
person Ves
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, if you've gotta make a fem akatsuki member, go with Deidra. I'm pretty sure shes a girl anyway. But if not, I'd like either Ino (FINALLY!) or a Naru/Hanabi/Hinata Threeway.
person PinkLove
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like Dei and Zetsu. But I have been waiting forever for a naruto/moegi/hanabi pairing.

Please!! Naruto has never been paired with Moegi. Please do it~~~!!!1
person UchihaShinji
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You never disappoint me. Great addition!

I am going to go with Naruto/Kurenai/Shizune as the next one.
person lyntjas
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this chapter but it could of been better and i vote for naruto/kurenai/shizune
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it would be funny to read about a Naruto/Hinata/Hizashi. Or is it Hiashi? I forget which is Neji's dad and which is Hinata's.