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person S_Wanderer999
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well an interesting chapter, not something I'd really expect from Shikamaru's mother. As for the vote, I say to go with the Kurenai and Shizune pairing or if you decide you wish to do a different one then my vote is for Deidara. I'm sorry but Zetsu is too much of a guy to even picture as a female. I will admit that Hinata is used a lot but then you have to give the point that most people who use her don't explain things (this goes for her being with Naruto, but more so other people), they don't finish their work, or it's just so poorly written that people stop reading (plus you have the fact that they sometimes make drastic changes to her without a good explanation, if any at all). Anyways keep up the good work and I hope to read some more soon.
person alphoric
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i vote kurenai and shizune
iunno think its a cute combo
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice.
person 89
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is the most kickass set of stories ever! i like them so much i don't even care who he gets paired with next.plz. update soon
person Joe
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woooh!!! Great chaptEr!!!

I want the DeIdara and Zetsu thing with naruto for your next Chappie!!!
person Dark
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I vote for the Deidara and Zetsu pairing. Also great chapter.
person Werty
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Deidara and Zetsu for your next sex scene!!!!!
person Steve
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a good series. I like the Shizune/Kurenai threesome myself.
person naruto#1fan hate sasuke
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so fucking great kurenai and the good nurse plz
person kuusune
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was supriseingly good dident think a pair like that wood work out in a naruto pairing good work.