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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked it and i pick narutoxshizune
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hinata is a gay bitch who stalks naruto i have prove quote "i-v-e a-l-w-a-y-s b-e-e-n w-a-t-c-h-i-n-g h-i-d-i-n-g b-e-h-i-n-d a t-r-e-e l-i-k-e a l-i-t-t-l-e f-a-n-g-i-r-l b-u-t i-m n-o-t l-i-k-e y-o-u i-m n-o-t s-t-r--a-i-g-h-t t-h-a-t-s t-h-e d-i-f-f-e-r-e-n-c-e b-e-t-w-e-e-n u-s" the dashes between the letters is her stuttering
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thanks was a weird pairing more sex next time
as for the next one im going to have to vote for the first choice
as for the next one im going to have to vote for the first choice
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. Hope this review is the one to help push your quota into what you wanted. Cant wait for the next chapter
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another sweet chapter can't wait to read the next an if i can sugest can u make the next one a naruto/tenten/ino/sakura
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yo... great story, can't exactly say that i've been following the story since day one but reading it all one can see that your writing style has been improving greaty... thank kami that you're a het loving male, we seem to be at a shortage of those... anyway continue the great work and make a naru/tsume (kiba's mom), hell maybe you can make a threesome... Naru/Hana/Tsume... some mother daughter action... i'm twisted like that...
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had to run an image search for female kakashi... guess what!!! Zero images... so i had to do my absolute best to picture ka-chan in my mind! But great chap! Keep it going!
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty good compared to the tenten one
i think you should do one where naruto is actually a girl
and gets discovered by an enemy of somekind
i think you should do one where naruto is actually a girl
and gets discovered by an enemy of somekind
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!!! Your storys rock keep up the good word. PEACE!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome story!!