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person Backlash
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me likey bouncy me likey bouncey me likey bou..... DAMN thats family guy. What I meant to say was I liked it. Thanks for puting this up to. I'm really happy that someone answered one of my challenges, that dosen't happen often, AND you're the on who wrote it so that makes it even better. Well can't wait for the next update and I'll see ya when I review the next one, until then bye-bye.
person Inuyoukess
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not as kinky as your other chapters but still interesting and original. Good job! I have a request pairing, if you would be so kind to write it. Naruto's sexy no jutsu backfires turning him into a girl permanetely. Female Naruto/Anko pairing. Now that would be HAWT!
person Drkman
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the stories you write they are so creative. I hope you continue to write these magnificent stories.
person take a guess
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yo dont force yourself to write at a hurried pace. if it takes time for you to write a great chapter then by all means take your sweet time getting it done.
person lycan
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.....wow...never saw that coming...but good...and well written
person Josh
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey DGOC hope to see another great pairing from you.. How about all the women in the series going to Naruto for some sexual relief cuz they know he has some of the best stamina.... Or maybe have a great unknown pairing of a threesome that is never thought of with Naruto and two women but who to pick... How about Tsunami and fem Haku....
person Anon
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you should do a naruto/temari/gaara fic. just throwing it out there
person icha icha hentai
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked that chapter it was hilarious and made me horny with all the stuff they were ding
person joe
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the last one was kind of weird but still good in its own way
person hey
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yo.. i love ur stories, i always have, i just think u should stop making guys into girls!! y dont u just use Sakura or Ino now? who gives a fuck what they did, as long as Naruto gets to fuck them rite?

well here's 1/70 reviews, i hope u update soon!!!