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person GDR
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!

any way I'd like to see more of Hana, and I mean ALOT MORE
person RandomGuy2547865
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...Naru/female kaka kinda freaked me out half the time as well as femita/naru but they were good non the less. anyway good job lookin forword to the next chapp. (do a Kyuubi one again! how about Naru/Kyuubi/Hinata/Tsunade/Shizune/Anko/Kuenai mega orgy. that sounds good but might be hard to write.
person big boy 2006
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like to see a Naruto/Tsunade/Tsumi.
person David
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your stories are eye caching and the seens are exeptionaly played out. though I thought your best one was the one were you had Naruto become Itachi and Sasuke's dad the ending was funny as hell.
person Steve
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was very good, particularly the prank at the end of the dance.
person sandor
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man, i can't wait who is next
person song of blood
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more you pervert! excuse me you king of perverts we bow before you HAHAHAHA you lead we follow!!!
person Anon
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you rule.
person big_show2000us
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ive always enjoyed your stories and since you have started to touch on the gender swapped versions how about you do a take on a female Gaara maybe when Naruto fights him at the end of the Chunin exam.
person Because I Can
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome as always. Kaka as a girl was funny as hell.

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