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person gaulreborn
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice, I am looking forward to the next one
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
..........................Well it was wierd at first............pretty disturbing with Kisame and...............well.......................Rrrrrriiiiiiiiiiggggggggghhhhhhhhhhttttttttttt...........

Anyway how about you do a Naru/Ten/Temari in the next one
person Ero-Senpai
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
After reading everything so far all I can say is WOW. Great job! You never use Tsunade too much.
person solar phoenix
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not your best chapter. I'm hoping to see one featuring temari some time soon.
person S_Wanderer999
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I enjoyed your most recent chapter. I have a question for you though, just how exactly do you go about reviewing this type of subject for somebody. And when you have the time is great, as long as you don't discontinue it after you have your own life as well.
person Because I Can
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol your lemons are always the best. Hey what do you think about a Haku/FemNaruto/Zabuza or a Femhaku/Naruto/femZabuza either way i don't thik they've been done befor and if u get realy bord u could do both.

Because I Can
person joe
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
most excellent chapter cant say that i saw that coming itaichi and mikoto very interesting indeed i was wondering if you could do one with kiba's mom next please i would be most grateful
person BrianDarksoul
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 29 kicked some serios ass man.
Mwahahahahahaha Goooooo Sharkboy Ass rape Hinata's Dad with your sword Mwahahahaha

Great job man anfd interesting potential. Update whenever possibnle. Myself I have a Naruto/KoF opottering about on my harddrive and it's in Hentaish taste Mwahahahaha
person amin
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great i loved it because most people make naruto a girl and paired up with a boy but you had a great idea of making itachi a girl paired up with naruto.that chapter i would say was one of the best ones out these series
person AzureAngelN
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice chappy my dick is so hard now i have to ejaculate it off do another tsunami one; update soon!