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person roxas
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome keep going
person ShadowlordJAPS
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good storys, keep it up. A pairing I would like to see is Naruto and Yoshino Nara, Shikamaru's mom. That would be HOT!
person Avatar of the Death God
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well its seems that you've done it
again. great work, even though im not a
tenten fan i thought it was good. im not sure what
your next idea is but could you cinsider
yoshino nara, tsume inuzuka, and any other
filler or say characters such as hinatas mom...etc.
but its your stories, keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should do one with sakura, Ino, Hinata, or all three at the same time.
person BrianDarksoul
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have perused upto chapter 28. The only thing I have to sa is... GOD DAMN that was FUCKING GOOD!

Pity Sansuke and his bitch don't suffer.
I loved the Kin/other girl bits

Go Naruto it's your motherfucking birthday Champ Fuck them bitches up and make them your whores!
(I hate Leaf BURN TO MOTHERFUCKING ASHES)(THE WOMEN SHOULD BE MADE NARUTO'S CASH WHORES )

Sorry little over bloodthirsty.... Methinks I house a Tentacle demon within..... would explain many things Mwahahahahahahahahaha!

Keep up the good work
person do you even care
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naruto/Naruto's mother....I know it's incest but you had him do it with his sister....perhaps you caould make up who his mom is...

Naruto/Tsume/Hana/.....Naruto/shikamaru's mom.......................Naruto/Hanabi/Moegi

One more thing....how about Before the uciha masaccre when Naruto was about 5 or 6, he comes across Mikito Uchiha, and Mikito uses him for her sexual frustration, I know it's minor, but hey you have written some pretty sick stuff before.
person Texan Ranger
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Could you do a Naru/Ino?
person foxsoldier
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can we get a naruto/ino rape with ino doing the raping
person Blaze W.
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter can't wait for the next one.
person Me
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are sick and twisted... and we love you for it. I am a guy, and proud of it! I am weird. Uhh... you could do a Hinata, Sakura, Ino, Temari, and Tenten harem for the last chapter. That would be awesome!