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Good chaper man please update soon and just an idea why don't you try a Anko x Naruto x Hana story well seeya later

Running out of characters arent you? Meh i guess there is always Shikamaru's mom, and mabye sakura....mabye <_< or her mom.....her mom would work @_@ shes got pink hair too right?

I read the Temari chapter which was cute, and the Ayame chapter. I like the Temari one better because I'm a bit of a Gaara fangirl, and frankly it's sort of hot having him watch his sister do Naruto. Ayame is less interesting since she is not a well developed character in the anime. You might consider having an aggressive woman like Ayame use birth control--but it is sort of sweet having Naruto worry about impregnating his lover. With a lot of cum all over bodies, not inside the woman, it sort of surprized me that you didn't do a rubbing it all over/erotic cum massage type scene--but maybe that's in another chapter?

hey man this was an awesome chapter i cant wait to read the next one with tenten in it i bet it will be awesome to read well please update as soon as you can

hey come its tenten turn to be with naruto make it happen

well the first one with anko was kinda weird with the fact that he decided to marry her after being kidnapped (in a way). but i will have to admit that i would not mind being kidnapped for the reason she wanted. hell i would have ran with he with no chains at all if she told me what she was doing. ill read more of ur fic later cuz i got some things to do. ja ne

Hey DGOC Hope you will make a new chapter with somebody new like Ino or TenTen in a chapter come on now. Bring us something more with these one-shot pairings with these lovely ladies and give us something new with some original girls that are known as Naruto's love interests

Yosh! Another writer with great series of one shots! Please, please, keep writing! I'd like to see that TenTen Fic ;.;
Keep up the fantastic work!

i have to say that its about time that you got to ten-ten ive been waiting for that one for a while. it would also be great if you could do a NARUTO/TEN-TEN/TEMARI ive seen many people asking for it or a TEMARI/NARUTO/TAYUYA. i would also like to see one with ino or one where sakura learns her place (like you did with hinata in your 15th fic). on another note you tend to do many fics with Tsunade, and while these in themselves are not bad she is 2nd only to naruto in appearences and you may want to tone it down so it dosnt get stale, but in the end its your choice. any way your pieces keep me coming back and i hope that you keep it up for a long time to come. ^_^

i have only one thing to say... THIS WAS THE MOST AWESOME FIC I HAVE EVER READ MAN , U CAME UP WITH THE COUPPLES THAT I NEVER THOUGHT POSSIBLE, the chapters are getting shorter is every thing ok ,question wat happent to the chapter with narujto and shikamaru's mother are u going to do it after the naru/tenten chapter ,
and are u going to do a naru/hinata chapter if not i'll say this all non naru/hina aside this is the best damn fic that i ever read in my life.