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Please, update! SO loong from last update.....

they were all great, i would just like to ask about the story 'Kyuubi no kitsune' on you fanfiction account, are you abandoning it?

Hey, uh...could you maybe have more detail/fucking in each chapter? Or just longer chapters? And adding into an erlier suggestion, a chapter where the R9 girls (Hinata/Sakura/Ino) get "Put in their place" after they berate Naruto, set during the chunin exam, in the forest of death... And if you make it a long chapter, you could include Ten-Ten, Temari, & Kin, & also Anko if she sees it on a security camera and decides to interfere? Or for one that involves Sakura (Like you involved Hinata) you could have the Kyuubi influence Naruto during a medical check-up,with Tsunade/Shizune/Both teaching Sakura with Naruto as an example.

hehehe soo did you ever decide on doing the one with Shikamaru's mom?

Great storys man. Hey if you can could you write one with just Naruto and Kin. Anyways keep up the great work can't wait till he next update.

wonderful writings my dear ran no kami (chaos god) i commend you for your imagination and darkness. I would like to eave the suggestion of a woman for Naruto-kun. As far as i know in the manga you never get to see Kibas father, what if Kibas father was long gone dead and Kibas mother was single? What if she seduces poor naive handsome naruto-kun and then later Kiba smells the scent on his mother on naruto? what would he do? I'll leave you with those questions and say until we write again,

sincerily

Sore wa himitsu desu.

Dude after the NaruTen could you make a NaruSaku?

I have read your story and must congratulate you on yout writing i can't wait to read more of your work if you update again could you send me e-mail also keep up the good work on fanfiction.net your story's are simply magnificent

dusk_tenchu

I know that i just wrote a review,
but i was thinking of some pairings that i
know that only you could pull off. one would
be kiba's mom, another yoshino nara,
hinatas mom, and maybe some of the filler characters,
oh and any male to female conversion char.
you can think of.

I really enjoy your stories and can't wait to read more of your work

i just recently thought up an intersting pairings that i would like to see of naruto/tenten/and anko ^_^ Just a thought