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Hey great story Lord of Dark Chaos. I only read 8 of the chapters and god your doing a great job with these pairings but the only thing is that some of the conversations are a lil too close so can you make it a bit more of who is talking to who if you can and keep up the great work

'...yeah..' Hahaha, your so stupid, I didn't get my feelings hurt. But when the entire Anime and Manga is focused on what the Title for the series is "Naruto" and you hate him you are not a fan.

Don't even bother to reply to this review, what are you like 14, that you have to say that you are not 'feces' when someone calls you a piece of shit.

But I don't think DGOC would appreciate us fighting on his review page so I am very sorry DGOC. I look forward to a update soon.

... sandman... i'm bothering to reply... are you going to call ghostbusters? hell, i already know my reviews are goin to get deleted, so i don't mind. i just want you to know... i'm 17... still a minor on this site like practically everyone else. i'm glad you're trying to be mature after starting this little debate... you should know, authors should deal with their own problems rather than have some horny teenager do it for them. just because you masterbate to this story doesn't mean you have to get your panties in a bunch when i say something about someone's author notes and/or character

Will you two please shut the fuck up, this is a review page not a chatroom. Great story DemonGodOfChaos.

Umm....I'm not trying to make this a little stupid fight but, SandMan56 shut-up already, your only dragging this thing out. ...yeah.., I agree with some things our saying, but It's called adult fanfiction for a reason, why do you think people would take the time to write out lemons if you are not going to do anything.

Also I agree with the rules here, you are a minor, and should not be reading anything at all on this site.

Well I'm getting off track, update soon please DemonGodOfChaos.

WTF A fight on a review page, whatever. Okay, this story is sweet, I think you should make the next one Naruto/female Itachi/ TenTen............also I would like to see female Gaara. :>

YOU MADE ME INTO A GIRL!? I guess i could thank you but... it's kind of intreging thanks and promise never to write yaoi(it's wrong, but yuri is fine)

Please update soon, you would make me and alot of people very happy. As for my vote Naruto/TenTen/female Itachi

I would also like to request:Naruto/fem. Gaara, Naruto/Moegi/Hanabi

I would like female Itahci and female Gaara like previous reviewers have suggested.

Also I would like to see a Naruto/Tayuya/Temari pairing as well as Naruto/Ino/Moegi

Great story update soon please.

~N.S.~

well, i KINDA like the stories, despite that i think naruto's a big faggot who would just fart the entire time during sex. but while i read the stories, i can't help but think the writer is a moron. a complete and utter moron clamoring for attention and a laugh by making these stories 'movies' and making a jackass out of himself... it really makes me stop reading. walking on the 'stage' with a liquor bottle... what a fag. and, basically, writing a bunch of oneshots is way too simple for my tastes. and, like, everyone's teaching naruto how to have sex! what's going on here?! c'mon! guys learn about sex around age 8 this day and age! what in the bloody 'ell is goin on 'ere?! nuts!

Make more! Fast! (Drool drop falls from mouth) C'mon!