AFF Fiction Portal
person AngelofDeath666
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why not do tenten/naruto/temari at the exam's in the forest or something. also with your oc maybe just make it Naruto/oc/tenten.

Will you check out my story Demon Of The Swirling Leaves, tell me what you think
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter and original.
i think u should do the ten ten one, she is one of the only ppl u haven't done and u can do the tsunade one later
person Mortal Kombat
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh DEFENTALY TSUNADE ABD THAT WAS THE MOST CREATIVE CHAPTER YET!
person korrd
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was great! I love things with Naruto/female Jinchuuriki. For the next one could it be Naruto/Tenten? Or maybe Naruto/Hinata/Sakura? And I know you don't like those pairings but maybe a rape scene for it like you did in that other chapter.
person James
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thats was by far one of your best chapter please update soon
person spayne
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
tsunade
person gRavitY MaN
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do the one with Tsunade.
person anonymous
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i say do one with tenten
person reviewer
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice.
I like the Tsunade idea.
person OHM
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do a Naruto/Tenten. There aren't alot of those. Besides, that's one of the few pairings you haven't done.