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person Intelligo
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work. Odd pairing indeed, but..eh. Whatever.

As for the next pairing, it's hard to say without knowing who this "hot woman" is....maybe...her...AND Tenten?
person Sleepy
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should eventually do a naruto/anko/tayuya story
person Myrmidon2010
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always a great inclusion to the slash overwhelmed Naruto fandom. Im guessing that the newly introduced character is the 2 tailed container, but i say go for TenTen as there arent many pairings of the Naru/Ten persuasion
person Kurochaos
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I know who your talking about and it's the woman who holds the Two Tailed Demon. By the way great stories.
person Sly
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do the hot lady then do tenten or ino or what ever one you can think of.
person Ecchi Baka Kon
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bwahahahah wow thats a first, Naruto/Naruko lol, interesting, though i still dont get where's naruko's personality comes from, ... i think i've beginning to like self/self pairings xD first harry potter/femself now this xD any ways keep up the good work and update soon V^_^
person Anon
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why not do both.. narutenOC
person shrubz
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Weird chapter. Weird is good. I think that you should write the chapter with the mystery lady. Maybe even have a followup of this chapter to see what happens. Naruto/Naruko/Shizune/Tsunade.
person spayne
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
naruto/tsunade/temari
person UnlikelyLoveUnlimited
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I did not see this pairing coming at all! I admit was a little unsure when
I began reading it, but by the end I had really enjoyed it. You did a great job.
Please write the unique pairing you mentioned,
rather than the Tenten pairing. Tenten is just too plain.

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