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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kinky, very kinky. I liked this chapter, and I have a few suggestions for future pairings. A few good ones are Naruto/Ino/Temari, Naruto/Ino, or maybe a story where Naruto ends up in a parallel universe where Sasuke is a girl (Naruto/Sasuka?). I figure the last one can't be that much of a stretch, since you already have naruto having sex with a female version of himself. Anyway, keep it up. Not every writer can write a good lemon, though most can imagine them.
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mystery girl
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Also naru/ino/saku/hina if u do it credit me and add my email
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINISH THE DARK LORD!!!!!!!
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you're meaning one of the new Akatsuki members, great. Tenten would be nice too though.
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think the new character sounds better, honestly. I LOVE THIS SERIES! *Gives a thumbs up to DGoC.*
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, I've got a special, odd, request: A Naru/Temari/Tayuya/Kin foursome.
Or a Naru/TenTen/Ino threesome.
I just like three or foresomes. Great chapter by the way.
Or a Naru/TenTen/Ino threesome.
I just like three or foresomes. Great chapter by the way.
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool Keep UP Kinda weird but whatever still good
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Another great chapter ^_^ keep going I want more...
now about your next chapter...you say you wanna do a OC/Naruto one....but some want Tenten...
how about you do a OC/Naruto/Tenten one? that'd make everybody happy, but once again your the author and what you says goes and we have to agree with what you write about your story.
Please keep going!!
now about your next chapter...you say you wanna do a OC/Naruto one....but some want Tenten...
how about you do a OC/Naruto/Tenten one? that'd make everybody happy, but once again your the author and what you says goes and we have to agree with what you write about your story.
Please keep going!!
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet go with a new charecter