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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter You are a great writer. As for the next chapter go with what you want. Naruto/Moegi Naruto/TenTen/Temari Naruto/Kibas Mom I forgot her name Naruto/female Deidara Naruto/female sauske Naruto/female Kakashi Naruto/female Gaara Naruto/Sasame
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good but u need to add some naruto/hinata since there is none here.
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great story, and it sounds like the next omne will be good as well, a Tenten story is about the only thing i still miss(along with more from Temari, Kyuubi and Tayuya) keep up the good work
and here's a lot of hearts for you
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and here's a lot of hearts for you
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot lady. let it be the hot lady. Tenten can have some later.
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story and great new chapter. very interesting concept. keep it up. whoever you pick next is once again will be a winner for the chapter.
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NARUTO/MOEGI NARUTO/FEMALE KAKASHI NARUTO/TENTEN/TEMARI NARUTO/FEMALE GAARA NARUTO/KIBAS Mom GREAT STORY
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to say that the series is pretty good and i have been reading it for a while now. i hope that you do one with Tenten, its one of the few characters that you havnt gotten to yet. though your new work is still better than most on a.f.f. i think that you should do a threesome or foursome again soon, you havnt had one in a while and they were all really good. keep it up!!!
P.S. dinner date on fanfiction.net is also very good and i read it too. but the beastiality reference with Hana was a bit sick. keep on writing for both
^_^
P.S. dinner date on fanfiction.net is also very good and i read it too. but the beastiality reference with Hana was a bit sick. keep on writing for both
^_^
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, you may not think so, but you rock! Man I check this story every day to see if has been updated. God, you have got to have more faith. Keep it up, just please, don't skimp on the details at the end. Write on! By the by, Naruko is a kind of kinky idea, I like it! Kinkieness is good.
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. One thing, Naruko is one thing, it's nice and kinky, but please nothing with female versions of the characters,
like female Kakashi for instance. And I thank you for staying away from yaoi and traditional pairings like sakura.
Hinata would be okay, but stick with the farther ones like Anko. Kyuubi makes a great character, keep her.
The story with Hana-chan was great. Ten-ten would be okay. Tsunade Shizune is good also. I like Kin, could
you do more with her? I liked Naruko. Please not Temari, she's just kind of weird. Kurenai is a god character.
Keep this up!
like female Kakashi for instance. And I thank you for staying away from yaoi and traditional pairings like sakura.
Hinata would be okay, but stick with the farther ones like Anko. Kyuubi makes a great character, keep her.
The story with Hana-chan was great. Ten-ten would be okay. Tsunade Shizune is good also. I like Kin, could
you do more with her? I liked Naruko. Please not Temari, she's just kind of weird. Kurenai is a god character.
Keep this up!
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm.... Mysterious hot lady or Tenten..... Hard choice......
Gaah! I must have both!
Continue the goof work
Gaah! I must have both!
Continue the goof work