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person TkMacintosh
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT!! MORE!

I like this story.... I'd say have Naruto do Hinata's mom....but if you can, please keep him like in the age between 15-16 cause Hinata's mom was drunk or something...

but anyway I love it anyway :D
person Intelligo
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work! One of the few straight Naruto lemon writers I know that can write rather explicitly but not "they had sloppy sex. The end."
person Random Guy
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh good stuff, hopefully one day there will be a Tenten pairing since she seems to be so unused. Keep up the good work!
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want the fish girl in the Anko filler arc sooner or later!

PLEASE~!
person phil
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have liked the series so far but must admit the last couple of chapter/pairings have been a little below your usual quality ...good but still of noticably lower quality.
person Fan of you
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know you're not a particular fan of TenTen based on your story "Kyuubi no Kitsune", but if you could, would you make a Naruto/Tenten pairing? It is a very rare pairing to see afterall.
person UnlikelyloveUnlimited
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! DGOC, this was a very good chapter. I also really appreciate the
fact that you through a little Tsunade in there at the end, as well.
I am really looking forward to the chapter dedicated to Hinata's mother.
By the way, have you ever considered revisiting old pairings?
Your writing ability has improved hand over fist since you first began,
and of course that would mean more Anko or Tsunade! :)

In any event, Im looking forward to your next chapter.

Your fan, Unlikely Love Unlimited
person magus
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it can't wait for the next pairing
person anybody
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
do a naruto/tenten one next great job on the stories by the way
person APienkoss
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice update ^^

Beside from a few grammar mistakes, this is not bad ^^

Hope to see the next update soon