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person Inuyoukess
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh very interesting last 2 chapters. Not very smutty but interesting none the less. Any chance you could a yuri with a female naruto?
person S_Wanderer999
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An interesting chapter. I find it funny that you made Rin Sakura's Aunt. Anyways I'll read the next update when it comes out. btw I know you don't really care too much for the kunoichi around Naruto's age, but I know the one I'd have Naruto with (from the Leaf) is Hinata. Anyways it is your call as always.
person james
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon
person Mz Demeanor
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how this collection is progressing. There is just too many yaoi fics out here and its really hard to find good het with Naruto as the main Pimp.
May I suggest who else you could pair Naruto with?

Try Blonde on blondes. Contenders are Temari, Naruto and Ino. I didn't include Tsunade since she is often used in this collection. You've used Tsunade 4 times already. Not complaining or anything but get the other girls a shot too.

Another pairing I would like you to try and write is the women in the 2nd Naruto Movie. You know the rival girls serving Haido. I think the women's names were Kamina (she's the only one I know for sure that's a hench woman), Ranke, Emina and Fugai <--- One of these girls is one of the travelling people and grand daughter of old man Kahiko I just can't remember which one it is.

Please continue to write more...
person Backlash Wave
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. This was really good, even though I don't know much about Rin. What is coming up, that one man 32 women one demon thing that was in this chapter. I can't wait for the ultimate nosebleed thing, when do you think you'll have that up. Update when you feel like it. I'll be reading and reviewing so keep up the awesome work. (sorry to lazy to log in)
person korrd
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh please do Hinata's mom and maybe include Hanabi in the action too.
person d
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really great story so far especially sasukes mom
person no importance
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i ilike all your stories. on aff.net and on ff.net. please update and i will read and review
person Zergling
schedule May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well you never stop amazing me with all the things that you write. You are by far more favorite writer because you keep writing great storys. A lot of your storys have over 35 thousand words total in them, most people usaually don't stay with the epic fics but you seem to be above that. great chapter and i can't wait for the next one.
seeya
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
W00t you finally updated! I think you should Naru/Rin next and maybe a Naru/Ten or Naru/Ten/Tem