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Heh. You need to put more 'variety' in the way you handle the situations. Not to mention you could still do Moegi. Lmao, I'm completely suprised you haven't used Sexy no Jutsu yet, but wonder's never cease.

If it's just a choice between those two, I'd have to say Shikamaru's Mom...but if I can suggest anybody why not Tenten?

I love these fics. Go ahead with Naruto/Rin. For the one after that how about Naruto/femHaku. I just love that pairing and I think you should do another one. Update soon.

Eh, wow. Big story there. Nice plot, Naruto is god. Gotta love that.
I have enjoyed all your stories, hope you update soon.

Woohhoooo a new chapter. That was awesome. That would be cool if this is actually what happened in the show. I can't wait for the next chapter. I loved that line "you're grounded" hilarious. Do you think you could post Kyuubi no Kitsune here instead of just on fanfiction.net. Anyway update when you can okay.

This fic is freakin awesome. It would have made an incredible multi fic though. Could you have naruto hook up with Nara Yoshino next?

Time travel is confusing so please don't go back in time again

I thought your stories were great. But I hate to say it but this chapter in my opinion wasn`t any good I thought the first part was cool that Nurato going back in time that was cool but as the story went on and on I started to get bored of it heck I skipped through some of it sorry about this review I just didn`t like the idea of making to be evil well that was just my opinion of this chapter your other chapters were really good. How bout the next chapter have the pairring of Nurato/Ino and Hinata or Ino and Sakura? Oh well keep up the good work.

Im so happy to see that you have updated. The "susuke's mom" chapter was a bit far fetched, but the sex was well written so it of corse gets my full approval.
Your writting style has improved by leaps and bounds as you have written this series, causing every chapter to be better than the last.
For future chapters, i think your idea of Hinatas mom is excellent, and extremely kinky when one considers the threesome possibilities when her daughter enters the mix. (I know you are not fond of NaruHina, bit i really think it might fit into that fic and actually work.)

And as a universal, eternal opinion of mine, the more naruto/ tsunade, the better, so If you would, always keep that pairing in mind.


As always, thank you for the new chapter and please keep writing.

im so glad that your collection is back up and the new chapter was a nice add on so keep up the good work ow and do shikas mom that well be funny