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person foxsoldier
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 5 so needs to be extended i think it could make a good story. oh i get goose bumps thinking of the possibilities. hmmm
person VolpyroHarry
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude make it a threesome with naruto fucking both sasuke's and shikamaru's moms that's way hotter than one and might get you more reviews or do sasuke's mom first then shikamaru's mom/ switched order= shika's mom then mikoto
person VolpyroHarry
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude i got an idea make a whole bunch of stories were all the mothers get fucked and some of the older women who hate naruto get drunk and have sex with him or kyuubi controls naruto a little and rapes them so he can show them what the "demon fox" can do( an example Tsubaki( not mizuki's girlfied) and or Ibara if u dont know who they are look at the biographies page on leafninja.com

BY THE WAY I DONT LIKE RAPE I JUST WANT TO SEE BAD STUFF HAPPEN TO MOTHERS OR OLDER WOMEN THAT HATED NARUTO BECAUSE OF KYUUBI
person Link Illuser of the Darkness
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You fan of you work manly I prefer your naruto stories to your HP. I had a idea for a smut though. I don't think you a fan of the Hinata but story with such a sub person mixed with a dom person like Anko would be intertaining. Also you done a dom Kyuubi but I never seen more than one story with a sub Kyuubi I think you could pull of either story.

PS. I want to see another Temari story.


Link Illuser of the Darkness
"Kill one man, you're a murderer. Kill a million, a King. Kill them all, a god.-Anonymous
person steven
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i beg you please make a naru/mikoto story please!!!!!!!
person RawD
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Each and every story you write is an enjoyable time spent ....
TenTen could be fun to read about.....
person Anon
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. 1 complaint though, Shizune is 30?

I want to see Naruto with his friends' mothers. :D
person Church
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DUDE THIS WAS SWEEEEEEETTTTT AS NECTAR!!!! GODAMNIT I HAVE ONE THING TO SAY FOR UR NEXT FIC MILF!!! (Moms I Like To Fuck) UR A GENIOUS AND SHIKAMARUS GONNA HAVE A NEW DADDAY!!! and sasukes mom LOL maybe if she was revived or something somehow it culd work but not wen hes a small tlll kid man i havea hard tiem imagining dat just make her revived somehow and do some funny shit and naruto marries sasukes mom and hell be like the clan leader or something like dat or renamed naruto could say to sasukes like WHOS UR DADDY NOW BITCH!!! lol cant wait
person vincent
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
do the shikamuras mom one that would be cool
person Backlash
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe I can't wait to read more. I love this fic so damn much. You have gotta update soon. Sorry that I don't have any suggestions for you. As long as Naruto gets some people will love it. "This has been your loyal servant Backlash Wave".