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well, im a female :P lol, try out tenten! or hinata or sakura then. please, no more OCs, the NaruOC one was HORRIBLE.

wtf what happened to the quality of this series. for a while there the chapters were so well written but these last two seem to have gone back to square one, damn you and your poor discriptive skills and odd diologue

i like the idea of the tenten an naruto story can it be the next chapter or maybe ino cuase she loves to boss people around well her an sakura no that would be a good one a sakura/naruto/ino now that would be female bossy isf u ask me

im a massive fan of your works. each one improves over the last. this shizune fic was very good. I myself like unusual couples in my fanfics. In the case of the Naruto series, Anko or Tsunade are my favorites to see paired with naruto, but The Pairings that I myself would like to see in one of your fanfics is Naruto ending up with with both Anko and Hinata, who, although they are as different as night and day, would go great with naruto, who to support them with thier problems (orochimaru trauma and paralyzing shyness,respectively.Plus the idea of the kinky anko introducing hinata to things she would never do with naruto on her own is kind of cool.

thanks alot and please keep writing, your lemons are head and sholders above the other stuff I wade though when looking for a good naruto lemon.

Dave M

cool do one with tenten :D

How about Tsubaki (Mizuki's woman). well i gave you one but any you do will be good so do whatever.

yeah great story i would like to see naruto and mikoto as a paring

do tenten plus temari and maybe combine it with naruto doing anko dominating her with tentens plus temari help or doing both.

for Mikoto do either time travel before the massicar and him saving her or before she marries itachs father and insteads marries him or have it that she was not there when it happend and that now she pretends or hides as an anbu or some one else.

how about getting them pregnant and see how naruto deals with that plus if he think like kyuubi about them being mates or as a human.

naru/ino or naru/ten/tem!

Another great chapter man! I have to say that Mikoto and Yoshino sound like very good ideas. ^^