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person Lord Serapheth
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My vote goes for a Naruto/Rin. Preferably one where Kakashi walks in on them or finds out about it some other way.
person Lord Serapheth
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My vote goes for a Naruto/Rin. Preferably one where Kakashi walks in on them or finds out about it some other way.
person OHM
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have Naruto do Tenten next.
person someone
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really, i think as long as you do anyone of those, shika's mom, sasuke's mom, or tenten or really anyone for that matter everyone 'll be fine dude, and no you aren't fucked up , and if you are then holy shit so am i
person carcharoth13
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NaruShizu is good for the soul, that I can tell you. Woohoo! Nice chapter there.
And the next one is Naruto/Mikoto or Yoshino? I say Mikoto, just to get at Sasuke.
Ha ha ha ha ha! That'll teach the brat. Good luck, dude.
Oh, and I'm not a girl (sounds like Haku...)
person TkMacintosh
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I say do Sasuke's mother. These storys are the best ones I've ever read....please! KEEP GOING!! I WANNA READ MORE!
person waffles
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nah not shikamaru's mom, she isn't soo hot, maybe tenten, like you said, or wut about naruto/ino
person gangsta
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn u should just give DGOF a break!! u shouldnt be critisizin his writin, because he's just practicin or somethin on here!!! he makes pretty good pairings so i think u should be thankful
that this guy is nice enough to devote a whole entire story on oneshots of naruto/kunoichi, or other women, because u dont find enough of it, and i think that DGOF is ok of a writer.
person Pyr00tje
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice yet again... However. I hope you'll start focussing on the regular girls now.... in stead of tsunade/shizune/etc....

For example... Naru x Ino x TenTen ... Or Naru x Ino
person Zero_Virus2
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all, this is a fine piece of work. Your writing style is among the best I've ever read, the descriptions of surroundings and the characters are excellent!!
One pairing I'd like to see is Naruto/Kyuubi with Kyuubi being the exact opposite from usually: NICE!! That would be a very nice pairing.