schedule
January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say im liking your story. Its written well and above all..Has originality unlike most of the other storiesw which are the same pairings. Its nice to see someone go for something different instead of going for a pairing that has already been written more times then I'd like to count. About the number of reviews you get for this story, dont worry, write it and they shall come, for the people who hate your stories, meh its their opinion so dont get hung up on it. Keep writing and Ill keep reading. Peace Man.
schedule
January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
on editing and gramer: i didn't and doun't care
on originality: i love this
on having the conviction to keep pumping these out: congrats
im going to stop say on i promis
i would like to see some parings whith narutos age groop other then tem
naru tenten would be nice
i would also apreceate sakuras mom
the orochamaru chapter was fucked up o well
love you ff fics
umbra you know you could have put all of that in one revew.
anyway to the first few revews where you were chastised for not seeing other naruanko stuf i would like to say this
for all those who havent notesed the serch engin is SHIT
i type in naru saku and still get yaoi that dosent evin mention saku i type this not at you
but at the uber bitch who gets off on flaming (revew 4 and 6 if you dount know who im refering to ) and to the admin
anyway ill shut up now love the story loking forword to the next pairing by
on originality: i love this
on having the conviction to keep pumping these out: congrats
im going to stop say on i promis
i would like to see some parings whith narutos age groop other then tem
naru tenten would be nice
i would also apreceate sakuras mom
the orochamaru chapter was fucked up o well
love you ff fics
umbra you know you could have put all of that in one revew.
anyway to the first few revews where you were chastised for not seeing other naruanko stuf i would like to say this
for all those who havent notesed the serch engin is SHIT
i type in naru saku and still get yaoi that dosent evin mention saku i type this not at you
but at the uber bitch who gets off on flaming (revew 4 and 6 if you dount know who im refering to ) and to the admin
anyway ill shut up now love the story loking forword to the next pairing by
schedule
January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want to see a Naru/Ino after Ayame-chan...^^
schedule
January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised you haven't had Moegi in for one of these. :S
schedule
January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great sex scene but you're starting to overuse Anko and Kurenai.
And what part of 'I want the Ramen Girl!' do you not understand? GIMME GIMME!
And what part of 'I want the Ramen Girl!' do you not understand? GIMME GIMME!
schedule
January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I never seen so many great sex scene in one place! Can't wait for more!
Oh yeah! One more thing!
~*gives umbra a boot to the head*~
Umbra, your ridiculous amount of exclamation points made everything go WAY off my screen! THANKS A LOT YOU BAKA!
Oh yeah! One more thing!
~*gives umbra a boot to the head*~
Umbra, your ridiculous amount of exclamation points made everything go WAY off my screen! THANKS A LOT YOU BAKA!
schedule
January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has bin your gratist story yet!!!!! You keep gitting better and better withe every one of your stories. Keep it up and never stop.
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NICE ONE MAN WOOT YOU DID GOOD!!!! cant wait for the next one too ayame and naruto SWEET!
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright Naruto/Ayame, I've been hoping to see one of these but I never see one. You know that you are my favorite author now. I can't belive it but you replaced Atropa as my favorite author. So from now on I will end all of my reviews for you with "This has been your loyal servent Backlash Wave". Yeah kinda dorky but still. Update soon please, and if you need anything don't hesitate to ask. I think my email is in my profile in the author thing. "This has been your loyal servent Backlash Wave".
schedule
January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
these are just sugestions just hurry up with the next chappie... well I'M WAITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!