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not your best work. you haven't done tenten or that girl that always hangs with konohamaru. those would be interestin to read.

You da man. Please you gotta update this when you get the chance. But um please don't do that to Anko she is to awesome, oh and Kurenai to can't forget her, that would just be plain wrong. I mean tentacles that is just ....... um disgusting, ya thats the word I was looking for. Although it would probably be better than Orochimaru, god that would be nasty. Anyway update soon.

oh my heavens. my hat goes off to you
your friend,
copier copycat

Lately, I've noticed that your chapters have been lacking in the plot department (and yes, some of us actually like to have some plot in our lemons), like this one (just 'Hanabi has a crush on Naruto and jumps him', too bad), or Orochimara (that one was just wrong). The problem is that since you refuse Naru/Saku and Naru/Hina, you cut yourself off from two of the girls Naruto interacts the most with, Tsunade being the third. We know from cannon how Tsunade feels about Naruto, so them becoming lovers can be imagined. This is why your chapters involving Tsunade are better for the most part. In that aspect, your Naru/Tsu/Shizu was one of the best.
IMO, you need at least one 'main interaction' (Sakura, Hinata, Tsunade are the easiest, Shizune and Temari are two other possiblities), and then you can put another character that is linked to that.
For instance : Naru/Saku/Ino, Naru/Hina/Kure, Naru/Tsu/Temari; maybe a bit more girl-on-girl action during the threesomes too...
Could you please consider a Naru/Tsunade/Sakura, maybe something based on the 'Issues' doujin, with Sakura as Tsunade's bitch (drool)

DUde, another great scene, as usual. How about a Rin/Naruto? I don't think that that has ever been done, and she is only Kakashi's age. Or you could do a Tsunade/Temari/Naruto.

great chapter i was hoping hanabi would be coming up soon ti would be kind of cool if you did one with ayame the ramen stand girl or maybe just one with shizune although i will hold out hopes for a naruto tenten fic too since it doesnt seem likely that there will be one with sakura or ino

yo good story m8

how bout you do a naruto/ino pairing

id like to see one of those.

DUDE DaT IS FUCKN SWEET!!!

Why don't you try Ino or maybe... even Moegi?

Do a Fic with Ten-Ten plz she doesn't get any play
help her go from 0_0 to ^_^