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Hay, what about that female ninja from the Snow Country? I forgot her name.

what about just a Kage Bunshin , naruto, and Kyuubi alone or just a naruto Kyuubi pairing email me what u are going to do for next chapter

dont make rape of ino tenten and sakura u meanie! its too late for hinata

this chapter was a nice present i guess...i was kinda hoping it'd be anko though
ne, ne, demon-san, when're you gonna post the next???? pwease post it soon!!!
can i make a request?? can ya please make one with shizune or tenten???? not mutiple, just naru and one of em???
please??? thanksa bunch! merry christmas and a happy new year!

oh my god this one was perfect, by far the best. you should do a follow up with hinata from this one, she never get t be a super slut

I could understand if you had sent Sakura or Ino with the clones, but Hinata? She's the only one who has never treated Naruto like shit. You should have more of the younger generation, they are not that overdone. The only thing that is truly overdone here is yaoi. We have NaruSasu, NaruNeji, NaruGaara, and just about every guy in the series (the horror!!!!!!!), but you and Redsliver are the only authors who write het fics AND actually update them. You could try some Naru/older gen/younger gen fics

Suggested
Naru/Tsu/Saku : Tsunade decides that Sakura needs a lesson on how to treat her teamate
Naru/Shizu/Saku : medical 'training'
Naru/Hina/Kure : boosting the shy girl's confidence
Naru/Hina/Kyubi(fem)
Naru/Tema/Tayu
Naru/Anko/Tayu : interrogating the prisonner
Naru/Hina/Hanabi : arranged wedding with both

I hope you'll use a few of those

DUDE THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!! MERRY CHRISTMAS DUDE!!!!!

That was another great chapter. It was really hot to. Merry Christmas and have a Happy New Year. This one is going to be printed out and put into one of my folders. I actually have a bunch of folders in my dresser with fics from you an RedSliver. Hehehe thats not weird is it? I just don't want to have to go online to read these all the time. By the way could you maybe write another with Tayuya, she just isn't in enough fics. I think she's hot.

Well yet another decent chapter on the books.

Kinda odd that there wasn't a scene where the slut-i-fied Hinata attacked the real Naruto after her release, that could have been interesting.

Keep up the smutty works and be proud.

After all I never review anyone.

that was the best damn story ive ever read. this has every naruto pairing ive ever wanted to see and more and i also thought that you did an awesome job with that last one with Tsunami

keep up the good work!