rate_review Reviews

Very good! Very good! This is an unusual plot line... I'm interested to see where you take it. The only comment I have is to Naruto's name... Nakyma. It really isn't a big deal, but that name isn't possible in Japanese. Nakima (technically Nakima would be the first character from each name Kyuubi is spelled out something like ????, Ki-(little yu)-u-bi, but the i is taken out of the ki when translating into romaji) However, the ki and the little yu are considered one letter pronounced kyu, so Nakyuma would work too. Understandibly, this fic is in ENGLISH!!! So why does it matter??? Really, it doesn't. (SO DO WHATEVER YOU WANT!) I just thought I'd throw my two cents in.

Dang, my hiragana characters didn't regester. Oh well (sorry)

Wow Naruto is just telling them what to do! Go Naruto!

O__O you really are a gorely person...the first chapter was heart-wrecking and pure torture! awww, poor Naruto!!! But i'm glad that he's still alive and at least able to tranform to human form. i wonder how much longer will it take for the other nins to figure out he is Naruto ne? Update!!!

I love your story, I hope that somehow Naruto will learn how to change back into his old body, even if for some short periods of time, so maybe there would be a chance at for romance ^_^. But even if that's not what you plan I really enjoy reading the story anyway!
I hope you'll update soon!

I love your fic! Never saw the ending for ch 1 coming. Did Naruto get any of Manda's or Kyuubi's knowledge or abilities? And did they truly kill each other in combat within Naruto? Fantastic fic and can hardly wait to see what comes next!

Update soon! d(^-^)b

Waiiii! I think I'm in love with "Chinese Dragon" Naruto. It's funny, original, and the characters are almost bang-on. I'm checking regularly for updates!

Gaahh ! a week without any update XD that's called torture :D *sporks phantasm* nah :3 I understand, must have school or university (like me) I hope you will find time soon enough to write down the following chapter(s) ^^

Please please update. I so love this story. I love how you made Naruto resemble a Chinese dragon. Anyway, I can't wait for the follow-up. Wonder how the village of Konoha is going to react with such a creature in their mists?