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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waah!! I want to cry! The chapter was so bitter sweet. I hope that they figure out or 'Nakyma' tells them that he's actually Naruto.
Just one question: Is Nakyma pronounced 'Nuh-kee-muh'? Am I close?
Just one question: Is Nakyma pronounced 'Nuh-kee-muh'? Am I close?
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tears up* Oh....that was so good! I wonder when they're gonna realize it's really him. I can't wait for that. *snicker*
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay chapter...wish we can get to the fighting already! UPDATE SOON!
I looked up Chimera and is nothing like you descibed. What you descibed was more like a dragon. Maybe if you take that tail of Naruto's, make it serpent-like, and have a snake's head on the end of it like some Chimeras have...that would make it more like a Chimera then a dragon.
I looked up Chimera and is nothing like you descibed. What you descibed was more like a dragon. Maybe if you take that tail of Naruto's, make it serpent-like, and have a snake's head on the end of it like some Chimeras have...that would make it more like a Chimera then a dragon.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
youd better update soon. the whole 'naruto turned demon thing' was cool
although the type of demon kind of turned me off to the story, but
the conflict thats going to come up soon really interests me. cant wait for
next chapter^^
although the type of demon kind of turned me off to the story, but
the conflict thats going to come up soon really interests me. cant wait for
next chapter^^
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great i like how it's going so far keep it up.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww poor naru-chan! hope thay see who he realy is
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's good...but the kyuubi is NOT the lord of all demons. He's just one of the nine legendary demons.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They found his jaw!! O_O ewww...WRITE MORE!!!!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This caught my interest...can't wait to see what happens next!! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOONER! UPDATE NOW!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see Naruto again :3 true the chapter is small, but as you said it will get longer with time ^^ gonna wait on that hope :D the first chapter with the whole 'possession' process was great :D I hope in the future we might be able to read a flashback of how they discovered the supposed scene of naruto's death :3 and of course, the past of the white demon during it's runaway =^~^= if I had time I would draw a pic of the white demon Naruto XD