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for The Ultimate Weakness

by MLL

schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it, it looks to be a very interesting idea and I can't wait to read more :)
person Imagy
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the beginging, please post more when you get the chance, babe~!
^o^
person Allys
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the premise of the story: it has a lot of potential for great plot twists. You have a few grammatical errors, but they don't bother me much. All in all, PLEASE continue. I would love to see what happened between the two, what Itachi has planned for Naruto and how, or if, they're getting their asses out of there.
person losthimagain
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O This sounds cool! Now go update it!
person Master Lenx
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really, really good. I hope you continue, and I am eager to continue reading this. I hope you update soon; I rarely have read such a story like this, and I am very forward in your updating.
person looli
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes please please continuepleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssse
love looli
person Momo
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please Continue. It's really interesting.
person Kero-chan
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You must continue!! It's twisty and I like that! :D
person Trek
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Continue! Your writing skills are not bad and this plot is original, with Itachi as the leader of Naruto's gang,
person Trek
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(sorry, I continue) Hokage nonetheless, as Sasuke the bad guy with no weakness. We already know it's not really like that but I like the idea. And above all it's a SasuNaru story, hope for a happy ending! Please continue! Good luck!