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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will it continue? Cuz it's really good, it has a story and some secrets and stuff, like what happened between the times Kakashi met Sasuke, one can only guess...
I must admit that I'm usually one of these PWP readers, but this one got to me and I like it a lot so... will there be another part any time soon?
Very well done!
~Horizont
I must admit that I'm usually one of these PWP readers, but this one got to me and I like it a lot so... will there be another part any time soon?
Very well done!
~Horizont
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start =) Kakashi and sasuke sure seem to meet up pretty often ne? Somehow sasuke does give me the impression of being a sMexy stray cat. Even though sasuke seems a little desperate for kakashi, it'll be cool to see kakashi really wanting sasuke-chan as well. Update soon!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was very nicely written. Very realistic too, and sweet in a sort of bare-bones down to earth way. I love the kakasasu in here and hope you'll write more! :D
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaw. that was so sweeeeet
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good. I mean incredibly so. Not just well-written as in it flows well and your spelling and grammar are basically flawless (though that in itself would really be something in fanfiction), but, I mean, guh. It's engaging and subtle and painful and really just GOOD. It's one fo those stores where I want to read it quickly to see what happens next, but I don't want to reach the end. I'm not generally a big fan of AUs, but you handle it so well that I just don't care. There's no real plot, but the story is still absorbing, a lot of emoting and thinking and all the stuff I love.
On a more superficial note, I love Kakashi and I luurve Sasuke, so Kakashi/Sasuke is super hot. And Kakashi + Sasuke interaction has so much tension and angstiness that's almost as hot as smut for me.
I don't know if you have plans for continuing this or not; if this is the only installment, it's lovely and ends with that nice unresolved angstiness that's almost sort of happy that I love. If you decide to continue it, I'd drool all over your future installments. Either way, please keep writing in the fandom (and writing in general). Finding little gems like these is so great. I probably won't be able to find a better fic tonight, so I might just turn in.
On a more superficial note, I love Kakashi and I luurve Sasuke, so Kakashi/Sasuke is super hot. And Kakashi + Sasuke interaction has so much tension and angstiness that's almost as hot as smut for me.
I don't know if you have plans for continuing this or not; if this is the only installment, it's lovely and ends with that nice unresolved angstiness that's almost sort of happy that I love. If you decide to continue it, I'd drool all over your future installments. Either way, please keep writing in the fandom (and writing in general). Finding little gems like these is so great. I probably won't be able to find a better fic tonight, so I might just turn in.