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by Potemkin

person sapphirexkat2
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad there wasn't more tenderness, but the emotions written matched Orochimaru and Kabuto perfectly. You're right - evil people do have emotions. Pity and mercy count, and Itachi had that for Sasuke, but that's a different story *kukukukuku*

ummm... anyway, nicely done! there really should be more Oro/Kabu... or Kabu/Oro... hahahah
person MultifacetedTune
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...I still think you should add more, lol. ^^
person blisblop
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sad...very very sad.
person Sephy
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm just glad I'm not the only one that loves this couple XD A serious take on Orochimaru's sadisim and apparent feelings he tries to hide for certain little minions is a hard find. The way he snaps at Kabuto in warning when the medic sounds like he's trying to comfort him, the way he spoke to heartbrokenly of Kimi when the poor boy left, then brushed it off. Ah, he just lies to himself! And Kabuto HAS to love him, no matter what haphazard use he's put to by the snake sannin, he loves the bastard XD (Maybe he's got a little masochist hidden in there? Or, when it's the only 'affection' you've ever recieved, what else could there be to love?)

Awesome. Hot. Angsty. Sexy. I love your quote "As if you'll love me any less becasue I hurt you."

~Sephy J
person nacht kind
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Delicious characterization. I wasn't warm'n'fuzzy, but I was not horrified, you found a beautiful equilibrium.

Enjoyed your writing and hoping you continue,
Nacht
person whatever
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was really well written!!
Plz write some more!!
Kabu/Oro was not one of my favorites but now it is!!!
person Orochimaru\'s Pet
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! You must write another chapter!
person Lady J
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeow.. :p *lick* mmm that was hot. o.o buh, that doesn't make sense but coherency is a bit beyond me at the mo.

fic.good.

bye
person Terra
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. Wonderful...I love it so much. I would love you forever if you wrote more. There isn't enough.. Especially not written this well. MORE PLEASEEEE!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely amazing, especially the ending. Wonderful details and characterizations -- I would love to read more, especially a continuation! ^^ Keep up the good work!!!