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by Kyuunoki

person Shima
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this was really sad but well written I loved it. *wipes away her tears*
person Just_me
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm, someone has a serious case of denial when it comes to crying... *stares at Sasuke*
Anyways, nice, dark and deep. I only read the manga, but it felt like deja-vu. :D
Now, If you'll excuse me, I'm going to hit my Sasuke-plushie and after that hug the big idiot. :3
person SeungHee
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Sasuke really needs a hug! > < Loved the oneshot! We all know sasuke could never kill his lover! :3 He just WUVS him soo much and Naruto too. Yup Sasuke did not cry but i bet he cries on the inside for his Uke!!!! Okay soo...yeah! Ja Ne! ^ ^
person F. C. Geist
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just got done watching episodes 129-133 AGAIN and so I'm full of the "AWWW SASUKE. SOMEONE HUG HIM" right now, and I'll try to leave another review when I'm less tired and less squishy on the inside from all of the angst I've just experienced. I love short one-shot emotive-type pieces, and this is quite good. Nice imagery here, and I'm a sucker for repetition. Tell me once that Sasuke isn't crying, and I go "but he should be, awww," you tell me THREE times that he isn't crying and I got "omg but I bet he is ON THE INSIDE, AWWWW SASUKE." I started that sentence with the intention of complementing you, but I think it just came out crazy.

Summary: Good.

Angst is, like, better than smut. Squish.
person Choi-sama
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How every aww... Haha. The ending reeks fangirl though. (Which is fine!)
person oOKeairaOo
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh... wow. Words can't describe how much I loved that. I wish I could leave you a longer review, but I honestly don't know what to say. That was perfect.
person oOKeairaOo
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh... wow. Words can't describe how much I loved that. I wish I could leave you a longer review, but I honestly don't know what to say. That was perfect.
person yaoilover12
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like so far. Hope you didn't have Naruto die, though.