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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That Was Beautiful.And So...Close To Reality.
Of Course,This Is A One-Shot.But A Complete Fic Would BE Amazing. =)
Your Writing Skills Are Admirable.Hope To Read More.
Of Course,This Is A One-Shot.But A Complete Fic Would BE Amazing. =)
Your Writing Skills Are Admirable.Hope To Read More.
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, sequel?
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. it was really good. The song fit the scene perfectly (and you made me go and DL the song to hear it. x3) There were a few grammatical errors but that's alright. Very sweet. You should write more. I love NaruHina. ^^
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that I love this fic...I'm a big fan of Naru/hina pairings, and this one does it really well, even incorporating lemon into the story without losing the characters. Only suggestrion I could make would be to glance through it for a few grammatical errors. Other than that, awesome job. n_n
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LUV THIS STORY. THERE ARN"T ENOUGH NARUHINA FICS OUT THERE. I really wish you would continue this fic and make it more than a one shot. PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
defently one of the better Naruto/Hinata ficts that I've read
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tis is amazing! You did a really good job. And the minimal lemon makes it even better.. The not too detailed lemon somewhat makes it more serene and beautiful. Concentrating more on the plot and the development of the story! Really good! Great job! You should write more!! I dont usually write reviews in AFF but I just cant resist to congratulate you for this awesome fic!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet, And I'm glad you broutght up the waterfall...
I don't like that fact that it wasn't HXN's first time. mmmm very good.
*Corny thumbs up*
I don't like that fact that it wasn't HXN's first time. mmmm very good.
*Corny thumbs up*
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite good and very sweet. I liked that tug of war between their emotions and wants before they made love.