rate_review Reviews

One word.....Awesome!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

Great One-shot, even though i think it shouldn't be one. But great job anyway!

I enjoyed the story very much. Your characterizations of Naruto and Hinata were good. I'd definitely like to read how they came together as well as how they deal with everyone knowing about their relationship.

i don't know if this fanfiction was to only be a One-shot but i think it should be more of a chapter fanfic. it's really good. it has a great plot, but it feels like it's only introduction, maybe it's not but if it was it would be awesome. i liked how you wrote this story, you feel their emotions and it i don't know just calls out to you. it's a great fic i hope you see more of your work soon please keep up the awesome possum work! chu!

I wanted to review this story in fanfiction.com but you for some reason wont accept unsigned reviews so you can die for that anyways back to the review i really like the part about how naruto learned of hinatas favorite color that stuck in my mind the most in this story i really think
that was great

if this was a reply to my challenge it was a good story but i wouldve like a more graphic one

that was excellent, you did a wonderful job with it. Your use of dialouge and body language was well done, despite this being sparse of visual descriptions the scene still came across strongly.

I'm curious which other fansite do you have stories posted at? And are they using the same screen name you have here?