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for Libido Juice Supplement

by RyalsShoal

person oOKeairaOo
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I have to thank you for writing a fic centered around Shikamaru. He is my very favorite character and, frankly, he needs more love.

Second, I also have to thank you for making Kakashi say "Ninja's honor." Do I really have to explain myself on that one?

And, finally, I have to thank you for this line: Shikamaru glared at his lover, and did not lower the kunai. “NO!”

Because... Shikamaru threatening Kiba with a kunai for sex is just... an amusing image. Overall, great writing. The story was hilarious, and I absolutely loved it.